rate_review Reviews

Hello there. I really like this fanfiction. It coincides nicely with the game. Seriously. When Seifer talked about his 'Romantic Dream' with Squall in the game, I could tell. =]. But back to the story. Your sensory details is dazzling. I also love how you express the feelings of the two. [But I just can't see Zell with Squall. Or liking him for that matter. I'm weird right? I don't know. He doesn't seem all that interested into him. But the hotdogs prove otherwise, ne? ARGH SIDETRACKKED AGAIN]Hehe. Anyways, AAHH. To say the least. Awesome story. SOFAR. I just hope you don't screw it up in Chapter 3 and beyond. Peace!

WUNNERFUL! WUNNERFUL! Oh godsss. When I finished it, I practically felt as if I was one of them. Great work! I'm happy to say, you didn't screw it up. It got better and better. I just couldn't stop until I finished. And it was a GREAT ending. Good job! Jolly good jolly good.

holy shit...

beautiful.

just... beautiful.

OMG, so good!! I loved it so much! Squall and Seifer... sooo hot, so hot! Hehehe. Seriously though, your writing is amazing, you're such a great author. And this story is awesome! Thank you ^_^

Excellent new chapter! Loved the lemony goodies, but I feel kinda sorry for poor Zell. Well, all's fair...looking forward to more!

wow! this is fabulous! but you said something at the begining about there being fifteen chapters, and there are only eleven here. is this all there is to the story or is there more? cause more would be great! there's still so much left to resolve!

eerian

This story is really, really awesome :3
I kept myself from going to bed just to read this story XD
I can't wait for the next chapter, such a cliffhanger!

:o. It's so freakin' good >_>.

I remember this story from waaaaaay back, and thank you so much for posting this here--it's such fun to be able to read this again. I love the way you characterize Seifer...but I think some of the Kiros moments were my favorites. Like when he rips into Squall over the way he treats Laguna--and that line about how he could probably wave his cock in Laguna's face and Laguna would just scratch his head and look confused. Well...those are some of my favorite moments until Kato shows up. His name was Kato, wasn't it? Ye gods... it's been so long, I've forgotten. But yeah, he has my vote for the best original character EVER.

Wow, the intensity meter just exploded! This is a very good story. I love reading it. I like that its Seifer who's harboring secrets instead of Squall (that gets old). Anyways, please continue. I'm intrigued as to what happens next.

kh