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by BadPriestSanzo

schedule June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
There were so many times I couldn't stop myself from laughing out loud and getting strange looks from my family!
Please continue with this story, the humour alone is top notch!
person Carro
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD! You have to update soon!! I've never read anything like this fic and I wanna see what happens next! Promise you'll update soon.. =3

Great fic! *thumbs up*
schedule January 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like it!!! MOre please!!
person HonoNoKitsune (nsi)
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Nice! Hehehe... Seifer, you dirty, dirty boy!

Anyway, great job!

I think I MIGHT not mind the short chapters if you update soon! =P

^_^
person HonoNoKitsune (nsi)
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! Hehehe... Great job! Excellent characterization; I would find it extremely hard to write from Seifer's POV, but you're making it very believeable(sp?)!! Please update soon! Very soon!
person QueenAdreena
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Entertaining chapter. Go onnn, make Seifer yank Squall into his room . . using brute force as per usual.
person QueenAdreena
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I could be mistaken, but that last chapter seemed a little longer than the previous. Well done! Haha, Seifers messing things up. I bet the next time Zell eats hotdogs around Squall, he's gonna suck and lick on them whilst giving the eye to ol' Leonhart. Nice work. Update soon, trust you will.
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Seifers evil, but I luv this fic!
person QueenAdreena
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those last two chapters were more on the kinky side. Loved 'em. Haah, Seifer left Zell horny, what an ass. Still frustrated at the shortness of each chapter, but at least you updated, like, every day . . or something. Keep writin'!
person Mearas
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm that was so hot!
Gods, is Zell gonna ask for Seifer's help? I hope it all ends up in a threesome.... *_*