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by BadPriestSanzo

person QueenAdreena
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another quick update. Thanks! I really liked this chapter. You cut it off at the best part just to leave me hangin', didn't ya? Paah. Is Seifer actually going to do it? Uh ohhhhh. Ha, Zells pathetic little note. Is Rinoa going to find out? *holds breath 'til you update*
person Wellington
schedule June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! Seifer has Squall in a very . . . interesting position. Fabulous.
person QueenAdreena
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heyyyy, you had to stop it there didn't you? I wanna know what's in the note! Oooh, Seifers gonna crash the Ball, can't wait. Good work, but still wish the chapters were longer *nag nag nag* Update soon!
person QueenAdreena
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooooo, i liked that chapter. 'Specially the mini Seifer/Squall attempted forced kiss. Not enough fics about like this. I wish your chapters were longer though. Love it! Update soon!
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one: This has potential. I love the plot you've got going and the way you started it off. Some nice description too.
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 2: Equally as good, but i want longer chaptttterssss! *whines* It'd give me so much more of your story to read. Plus, you hardly ever see any rape fics around.(apart from mine) Non-con ahoy! Update NOOWW!
person Anon
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more more more!!!!!