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damn that was good!!! i sat for 9 hours almost straight and read this story! thats how good it was! sept for when zell told irvine to go....then it was sad and i cryed.............but other then that it was amazing!!!

T^T noioo i read it all, *wanted more* lol its an adictive and damned good fanfic, i hope to see more some time. I love that pairing.

You are a legend. The best Zell/Irvine fanfic ever! Keep it up!

Ahahahahha WOOH!! Yay Gackt XD lmao
Anyway...
I love this story soooo much!!! ^_^ I come home and read a few chapters every day but now I'm at the end and I'm kinda sad but happy cause I loved it soooo much!! ^_^ Thanks for being so great!!

Umm... I think this is a fabulous story, and you certainly are a great writer. You make everything seem so natural and it all flows together so well. So I gotta say, the thing that bugs me is the way you make Irvine so accepting of Zell's behaviour. It boils down to Zell bein a macho, insensitive boor at times, and I sure don't think the cowboy would stand for that... And the way he totally doesn't seem to want to go back to his family. I thought your story would have Zell and Irvine making like a compromise and working things out together to form a balance of both their ways of life and be totally different from all their peoples in their combined way of life. I think it is quite unrealistic Irvine would literally just drop everything and take it all without very much resistance. Zell's behavious is fun to read and it is an integral part of his character, but it gets to a point where that sorta over-shadows Irvine's own personality, which makes for reading where I actually wince at, especially the aprts that just seem so very against basic instinct. Still, I like your story, and it is YOUR story, so feel free to ignore me.

Kitty!! OMG! OGM even! That was a great ending!! It was a long time in coming, but it was soooo worth it. It gave me happy tingles. I liked that Zell really was a member of the orphanage gang, as I had wondered about the skin thing (silly Irvine not questioning).

I know it wouldn't happen, but I kind of want to see a prequel to this story, about how Zell came to be a part of the tribes. How he learned the customs, the period before the was marked as a Taker, what Kiros was up to... Kiros was a real bitch in this story, btw. (^_^)

I look forward to your next great work!

Wah...this story is amazing. I kind of thought the savage would be Squall at first (Squall/Irvine. Don't ask me why I like that pairing, I just do) but the arrogant - thought lovable - character suits Zell better. But what will happen next? Ooh, I'm on teeterhooks! (where does that phrase come from?!) Please update soon, and notify me if that's not too much to ask.

I'm not trying to be rude or anything, but do you guys have any plans to finish this? It's a really good story and honestly too many writers are leaving us with cliffhangers.

0.o... ::wipes away slight trail of drool:: Kitty, I hate you. I truly, truly do. You gave me this recommendation, and then I had to return to normal life with classes with images of Zell and Irvy in loin cloths. Mm... loin cloths... Tch! NO! BAD SNAPE!

On a totally separate note: WHOOT! This story was t3h awesome! I seriously can't wait for chapter 22! If Zell's gonna do what I think he's gonna do, I'm going to be so sad! I love native Zell and his pet cowboy too much for bad/sad things to happen to them! ::sniffle:: Can't someone just tame Seifer, and they can all live happily in the encampment? Or... or something? Zelly- don't be noble! (T^T)

To summarize: Story's awesome, please don't keep us in suspense much longer, and I'm soon to have a month's worth of notes decorated in loin clothed cowboys.

Isn't it time for an update on this?..... please?