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I've been following Mine for quite some time now. I have to admit that this is one of the best Zell/Irvine AU fics I've read so far. A very dominant Zell and an extremely passive Irvine is a refreshing sight to see.

Major kudos on this story. Just found it a couple days ago, read through, loved it. I'm not usually one for wesern-themed things (too many stereotypes for me), but you do this one well. You seem to have FF8 and then add just a little bit of Cowboy Flavor to it (Somebody ought to market that, it'd make a killing). Anyway, can't wait for the next bit!

~ And there it was.
Oh gods, there the wicked-lovely awesome part finally was. :D

Why,
the way this part was written made the whole lemon-scene
much more beautiful, sensual and..

HAWT.

..I simply had to type that. Sorry. :3

The more-often-than-usual switching POV made this chapter /feel/ so damn good.
And Zell's arrogance is effin' great. I'd prefer Chickie to act like this in the game too..

Now I must worship you.

Just effin' demented,
Boo

*drooooooools* mmm smexyness..... goddamn you write mighty fine lemon, I salute you!

So far I really like it, and hope for some Seifer/squall as a side pairing. I like too much Seifer *sight* Except that I really like the Irvine/Zell pairing :D It's one of the few I really like and the savage part is kinda cool. Go on I really want more

lol. i love the way you guys think. poor seifer and irvine. seifer, because he can't find zell and is getting stressed out (i think squall should help him relax a bit, since they're alone and all. ^_^) and irvine because zell hasn't given him no penis yet. *snickers* anyway, great work. i look foward to the next update. hope you both had a happy new year!

Ahh, at last you updated! I love the way Irvine are starting to submit to Zell. Just perfect. But a little question, you put numbers after some thing. Like after the comment about cockatrice meat tasted better then grat but bled more, there you put number 1. I thought you were going to explain or say something in the end about it. But now you didn't. Why?
Hope ypu understand what I mean, I'm really bad at explaining.

Anyway, I love this story. Please update soon again.

oooo yes update! Yay finally Zell will have his taken! Did i say that right? Anyways yay update soon cause i serisouly cannot wait to read the delicious part of this fic. =3

~ Even after reading your stories so many times from my goddamned CELLPHONE,
always in secret at night between 00.00 and 03.00 a.m,
I simply cannot stop falling in love with them all over again.

Especially this beautiful piece..
I just heart and adore your way to describe Irvine's, Zell's,
and everyone else's maelstrom of emotions and thoughts..
You truly can make their talking and acting seem so..realistic.
So like /them/.

And all those meanings you've made for every damned monster..
It just seems so right. God, I love the thing with Jirrah's spit. :9

And I cracked at the "Dot"/"Whatever"-thing.
Would've been rather typical from Squall.

I've adored your Irvine since God knows when.
I can hardly remember.. Perhaps it actually was you who made him to be my favourite character in VIII.

So.. Thank You (and Hicky :3 ) for brightening my day once again with one exciting update.
( Egh, my English sucks. I can't speak the godforsaken non-native language.)

Always here on the other side of the Planet,
Boo

Is it weird when other people reply to reviews for the author, cause they know the answers? Well, when it's Kit and me, no, because half the time we're in each other's heads anyway. I got answers! If other reviewers read answer in review format. I know I do... I'm weird though. I read my friend's review, but I still got thanked in brackets!!

Anyway, I said answers, so here they are:
Esther: Kitty actually writes her fics in one continuous document. Since I get it regularly, I assure you it's huge, and the footnotes have made it to 24 for the entire fic. It's not that she didn't post the footnotes for the last chapter, it's just that she forgot to cut, paste and change the numbers. I know for the flock one it's another note on "Look, Kitty can bullshit more collective nouns." or something along those lines. I don't exactly remember the blood one, but it may either be my fault/have me in the explanation. You may have noticed I'm in quite a few. XD

Boo: I'm glad you liked the Dot. Am I'm glad Kitty obeys me. *laughs* I'm sure Kitty will be all blushy when she reads your review. She's been RPing Irvine with my Zell for over two years now. Continuously. I don't mean like, once or twice a week. Unless one of us is away it's pretty much EVERY NIGHT for 2 years+. So, we have lots and lots of practice. And I think about 2 MEGABYTES of RPs. They've gotten pretty... busy, and very "fit". *giggles* Now go read Lightning if you haven't already cause that's by me and Kit together and it a good fic! Yes, I can say that about my own fic. I love Kit's writing, she loves mine- and a lot of the time you won't know who wrote what unless you look at the chapter number. XD