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awesome fic~! was drawn to it because sephiroth was in it~ really in love with ur idea to make him a god like GF giving Irvine some big big problems to deal with.... the fic is real nice, there's a storyline, character interaction, crossing with ur other fic... and since this will never happen in real gaming world or original plot, so it's nice to see what COULD happen IF sephiroth became a GF... and giving him GOD like powers is a great idea since he's really all that god like... (FF7 AD, he juz came and went like that, as if he's some spiritual being...*shrugs*) really like ur fic... no complains, *thumbs-up*
just curious since i didn't finish playing ff7, did sephiroth get those wings in ff7 game as well or was it just added during kingdom hearts? seen him in KH b4 and noticed that he and cloud have wings in there... so just curious...
so will we be expecting more of sephiroth problems to deal with in the next chapter.... sure wish to see more..~! and when will leviathan figure out who sephiroth is...? well, keep up the great job~ no rush to update (quality, quality~) and all the best~!

animanga234

Dude, I doubt they'd be using Mako anymore. Even Rufus is opposed to the idea in AC. Also, I'd very much like to see Squall try and destroy Sephiroth *snickers* (who, by the way is strong not because of mako, but because of Jenova cells). Aside from that, elements of the story are especially hot, so I still like it :P.

Whee. There were a couple typos I found, but nothing too terrible. The chapter overall was nice, despite the lack of smut.

Sephiroth should know at least the name Leviathan, though. He was the lead general during the war with Wutai and their main god is Leviathan; in FF7, you get that Materia after beating Yuffie's father in the fight up the temple. That's just random trivia.

CP the happy

That was mindblowing! Stunning and just all out incredible! There was so much tension there I can still feel it winding around me. It's a solid piece of work, extremely well-developed and full of powerful emotional impact. Sephiroth's shock and that thing akin to remorse that he feels is wonderful, as is Irvine's conflicted emotions about whether or not he can handle and hold on to what he wants so badly.

It's so funny that Squall is being the 'Moody Pregnant Bitch' when he was the one who was happy to be pregnant in the first place. And Seifer seems just a tad mellower than usual. Hormones... they're a hell of a thing! ;P

I really am starting to like Leviathan. After the emotional upheaval of the lab scene, Leviathan's calm, firm appraisal of the situation really was like the rush of cool water you describe it to be. He is exactly what those two pretty boys need. This one's going to be very, very interesting. Please continue as soon as you are able to. I enjoy following this story in a way I do few others.

omg That was great, I hadn't read it yet hehe and you know Me when I heard BDSM I was like ohhh... and omg its great can't wait for more... think you have done the story right yet far. keep up the great work

I love this story, hell this whole interconnecting series. But this is my all time favorite. The was Sephiroth and Irvine interact, priceless... I can't wait for the next update.

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This is so freaking cool. For once, a crossover fic has almost flawless (at least I don't notice any mistakes) logic. I will be forced to hunt you down if you stop writing this fic ;_; because I wurb it.
Please keep writing!!! I love it!!

That was so incredibly hot and painful! Amazing sex, truly breathtaking, but the plot, the powerplay is no less spectacular! The final image of Sephiroth weeping in his cell is so moving. I feel for him, but I feel for Irvine too. This is such a tough adjustment for both of them. I only hope now that somebody doesn't sneak into the lab during the night and try to play with an all-powerful GF during one of the few times he's away from his host. Amazing work!

...Sephiroth on bottom. That in and of itself is a disturbingly hot mental image. Irvine being spanked, even in punishment, was great too. I should be starting my work on the next chapter of Redemption later today, so I just took the time to read this and offer my content drooling.

CP the evil

I suppose "MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE" would correctly express what I want to happen with this fic. LOVE it. It's one of the best I've ever read. Sephy = mmm. Irvine = yum. Sephy doing Irvine = oh my freaking god askdfjl;sdhf *nosebleeds*. I think that's about it. More, please! Update! Update!