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person sazzzzzzzzzz
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha

write some more now, i like it. and more fujin, she's the best. and gay. make everyone gay, and kill rinoa off in an interesting yet unsubtle way.

kthxbye
person Pineapplegirl
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loooooooooove this! The humour in Squall is great! Why dosen't he become a stand up comeidien or something? o_O
person QueenAdreena
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Funny, in an idiotic way. None the less, still made me laugh in places. Squalls so un-squall like, but that doesn't matter because its humerous. By the way, you got Raijin and Fujin the wrong way round. Fujins the albino.
person Obsessore
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far so good! Write more. Oh and about those children... -grins-
person squalmasy
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Absolute, pure, unadulterated genius. I worship your work. It's brilliant. Write more soon?
person Tricia
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg, this cracked me the hell up. It's great! I love the tone you've given to Squall. I am *definitely* looking forward to the future chapters :)
person Miss Havok (too lazy to log in, look me up)
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuck, that's hilarious. Thanks for making me smile- this sounds kinda like some of the stuff I write. Totally approved. Keep it up!
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story, will there be more? Anyway if there is, update soon ne? (I say that to every story / author i review ;) lol)

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