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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
**rolling on the floor laughing** I LOVE this chapter!!
oh that was too funny...seifer smashes squall's head in the refrigator and it just turns him on even more...**giggles**
oh good lord hehehe
oh that was too funny...seifer smashes squall's head in the refrigator and it just turns him on even more...**giggles**
oh good lord hehehe
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was so hilarious!! I laughed so hard, I couldn't believe it. Let me just say that Vincent is my overall
favorite character out of anything and him paired with Irvine was actually one I once considered and let me just say
that you did an excellent job. They are so hot together!! Seriously. Ooh, I can't wait for another update.
Great job!!
favorite character out of anything and him paired with Irvine was actually one I once considered and let me just say
that you did an excellent job. They are so hot together!! Seriously. Ooh, I can't wait for another update.
Great job!!
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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*has gone brain dead from the events that occured the last chapter*......................................that was.................*wipes the drool away* you. are. a. god. that was so out-fuckin-rageously hot. i loved the way vincent was so controlling and zell.... *begins to foam at the mouth again* this is so going on my favorites list. wonderful work. absolutely wonderful. ^__^
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December 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Do you know how long it took me to refind this fic XD well, here's my nice long review/commentary...
LMAO! I dunno some of this is like, so cliche I want to just shake my head, but I like the original touch you've added too.. ambercrombie and starbucks but still pertaining to the world of Final Fantasy =D
I must say IrxVi are a pretty sex pair but I still think I prefere SqxIr or VixSeph
I love Vinny's hair ;_; and in most of the doujinshi he's pretty enough to be my young mother lmao *yeah right*
'BUT, being the man of tactfulness and understanding appropriate public behavior, I decided against the licking.'--and skip straight to the groping :3
I imagine Vinny would have a very beautiful voice too.. Jap or American or otherwise... smooth and flowing and beautiful .....:heart:
“Thank you Irvine. You...seem to understand the trials of my life. I...wanted to thank you for listening. Nobody has cared enough to listen to everything I’ve told you.” What I don't count here???? geez -.-;
dammit I get as far as leather pants and Irvine's not the only one being turned on lmao XD
lmao I like his answer Fuckable... better than what about half your readers would come up with... me... my mind would be blank LMAO I'd settle for action at this point, not words... and if all else fails I suppose I could sit down and chat "There is a Heaven and God loves me ;_;" but that would seem a little odd...
“I want you.” actually that would qualify as a complete thought... in the situation he's in with as sexy as Vincent is, it's a wonder he can even speak.... three points for clear headedness XD Go Irvine!
He. Is. Gorgeous. no more complete thoughts XD 1 point for trying heehee
He then assists me with his sexy, but evil pants. lmao sexy but evil LMAO XD
How can one man be so...perfect? easily... they have names... like Squall and Vincent... Sephiroth is still God though :3
“Do it Irvine. I’m not going to break. Fuck me.” we 'innocent' people tend to use that phrase when we like it rough =D
“Excuse me, sir. Are you ok in there? Do you need help?” Obviously, the prick either didn’t see me slip in or forgot I came in here too. ROTFLMAO I'd be a bastard and reply "Yeah how about some lotion buddy" XD
lmao XD
WHOO visa XD but for everythign there's a Mastercard... I think Irvine would be the Master Card in this relationship mwahahah *bad joke get over it XP*
o.o; I think Ima write a very blunt to the point story of FF8.... where it starts off with Rinoa's already dead... no questions asked XD
O.O OMG KILL ME x.x "What do you mean Squally" waaaaahhhhhhhhh are you sure this isn't a horror story?! x.x; Ok I'm done....... I think....
XD sorry if Squall barged into the room like that an swore very loudly I'd spew my drink all over and die laughing on the floor... even if Squall did it for a good reason XD Lmao a cup XD a cup XD
damn sexy is fucking right O.O; it's back! that's Rinoa thing is back.... ;_; *sniffs* ... *cries*
lmao DAMN Squall's a bitch XD I thought I was bad but those presents man =D 3 more points for creativity =D *I did wrap a present in crumpled newspaper, put it in the bottom of a box and wrapped some bricks in wrapping paper.... my friend thought all I gave her were some bricks XD*
--Seifer, but either the man is dead when he’s asleep or he’s doing an awesome job of ignoring our friend. W00t dead.... Izumi Sano is the number one greatest sleeper *from HanaKimi* Who has perfected his techniques of being able to fall asleep anywhere, including with his eyes open
heheh I never liked him much but torturing him is fun XD
“He teases...alot.” and that’s bad? Actually in a chat once we played truth and someone said they’d tie my up, get me until I was about to orgasm, then stop… then do it again XD I told em I’d find some way to kill them, even if I was tied up
awww it’s over XP hehehe butit was fun =D still can’t really say I enjoy Zell in fics x.x;
But Love how you portrayed Vincent :3 =D
The only thing I would suggest is maybe a Beta reader or sumin for typos…. I can understand the language *wow Typo is its own language ^ ^;* but it’s always better to read a fic that has good grammar/spelling.
Not too shabby though :3
LMAO! I dunno some of this is like, so cliche I want to just shake my head, but I like the original touch you've added too.. ambercrombie and starbucks but still pertaining to the world of Final Fantasy =D
I must say IrxVi are a pretty sex pair but I still think I prefere SqxIr or VixSeph
I love Vinny's hair ;_; and in most of the doujinshi he's pretty enough to be my young mother lmao *yeah right*
'BUT, being the man of tactfulness and understanding appropriate public behavior, I decided against the licking.'--and skip straight to the groping :3
I imagine Vinny would have a very beautiful voice too.. Jap or American or otherwise... smooth and flowing and beautiful .....:heart:
“Thank you Irvine. You...seem to understand the trials of my life. I...wanted to thank you for listening. Nobody has cared enough to listen to everything I’ve told you.” What I don't count here???? geez -.-;
dammit I get as far as leather pants and Irvine's not the only one being turned on lmao XD
lmao I like his answer Fuckable... better than what about half your readers would come up with... me... my mind would be blank LMAO I'd settle for action at this point, not words... and if all else fails I suppose I could sit down and chat "There is a Heaven and God loves me ;_;" but that would seem a little odd...
“I want you.” actually that would qualify as a complete thought... in the situation he's in with as sexy as Vincent is, it's a wonder he can even speak.... three points for clear headedness XD Go Irvine!
He. Is. Gorgeous. no more complete thoughts XD 1 point for trying heehee
He then assists me with his sexy, but evil pants. lmao sexy but evil LMAO XD
How can one man be so...perfect? easily... they have names... like Squall and Vincent... Sephiroth is still God though :3
“Do it Irvine. I’m not going to break. Fuck me.” we 'innocent' people tend to use that phrase when we like it rough =D
“Excuse me, sir. Are you ok in there? Do you need help?” Obviously, the prick either didn’t see me slip in or forgot I came in here too. ROTFLMAO I'd be a bastard and reply "Yeah how about some lotion buddy" XD
lmao XD
WHOO visa XD but for everythign there's a Mastercard... I think Irvine would be the Master Card in this relationship mwahahah *bad joke get over it XP*
o.o; I think Ima write a very blunt to the point story of FF8.... where it starts off with Rinoa's already dead... no questions asked XD
O.O OMG KILL ME x.x "What do you mean Squally" waaaaahhhhhhhhh are you sure this isn't a horror story?! x.x; Ok I'm done....... I think....
XD sorry if Squall barged into the room like that an swore very loudly I'd spew my drink all over and die laughing on the floor... even if Squall did it for a good reason XD Lmao a cup XD a cup XD
damn sexy is fucking right O.O; it's back! that's Rinoa thing is back.... ;_; *sniffs* ... *cries*
lmao DAMN Squall's a bitch XD I thought I was bad but those presents man =D 3 more points for creativity =D *I did wrap a present in crumpled newspaper, put it in the bottom of a box and wrapped some bricks in wrapping paper.... my friend thought all I gave her were some bricks XD*
--Seifer, but either the man is dead when he’s asleep or he’s doing an awesome job of ignoring our friend. W00t dead.... Izumi Sano is the number one greatest sleeper *from HanaKimi* Who has perfected his techniques of being able to fall asleep anywhere, including with his eyes open
heheh I never liked him much but torturing him is fun XD
“He teases...alot.” and that’s bad? Actually in a chat once we played truth and someone said they’d tie my up, get me until I was about to orgasm, then stop… then do it again XD I told em I’d find some way to kill them, even if I was tied up
awww it’s over XP hehehe butit was fun =D still can’t really say I enjoy Zell in fics x.x;
But Love how you portrayed Vincent :3 =D
The only thing I would suggest is maybe a Beta reader or sumin for typos…. I can understand the language *wow Typo is its own language ^ ^;* but it’s always better to read a fic that has good grammar/spelling.
Not too shabby though :3
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XDDD good lord, I will love you if you make the next chapter as good as this one.
And that is the most awesome way to dump someone *dies in laughter* and it makes the title make alot more sense
And that is the most awesome way to dump someone *dies in laughter* and it makes the title make alot more sense
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD That cracked me up. Rinoa was a pain in this chapter! Poor Squall took him a long time to finally break up with her. Great chapter! Please update soon I cannot wait to know how Zell finds out he is gay!! XD
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable, I hope you continue with this! Its quite different and very amusing. :D
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great story you got so far here. I loved the whole dressing room smex! So hot! Anywasy I cannot wait to read more. ^^
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, rather amusing and kinda hott. I'm not sure how i would approach the writing of Vincents personality, so well done you. Hoping to see how Zell discovered he was gay next.