AFF Fiction Portal
schedule August 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! I need the next chapter! Please!
person unknown
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
=O CONTiNUE!!! =O
person Cwolf
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was good, though Tifa seems a little off in this chapter (just a tad). In my mind the poor girl had been through so much I don't see her as easily frightened. Anyway, wonderful writing.
person Bleuwyn
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Although Vincent is a little too depressing for my taste, but hey it's just a story right? Thanks for your suggestion, I'm already wracking me brain for another fairytale, maybe involving Red XIII and Aeris. Keep up the good work on your story, can't wait for the update!
person Cwolf
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the whole feel of this piece, cold and dark. You also did a nice job drawing out Vincent's personality. Nice work.
person Anon
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Depressingly sweet, but I loved every moment of it. Please continue this soon
person DarkFae
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very vincenty! mebbe it should have been longer to catch the eye and make ppl want more, but i liked it cuz i love vince, and he's so so sad... ^_~