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for Beneath the Red

by DarkFae

person MoggiyeM
schedule March 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG this was such a good story! <3 great work!
schedule November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh god, I reviewed this before, and here I am back for moar! And it's still as delicious! I love this fic. I shall hug it. :)
person Idwraith
schedule June 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Romantic, twisted and macabre, but very romantic. *chuckles* I'm not sure if I have less preconceived notions than a lot of your readers because I've never been exposed to the FF series, aside from helping a friend play number X for a little while. None of my friends played them and I never owned my own game system *lol* so I've never played most of them, though the graphics have always been impressive. But, anyway. I don't have "expectations" for the characters and I'm not sure if that lets me appreciate where you take them more, or not get as much out of them as some of your audience, probably both. But either way it was very well written and I found it quite romantic. Very good. You get a cookie.
person z32
schedule December 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I really enjoyed it! The whole Vincent behavior was awesome!
person nanimo
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really loved this story! It kept me at the edge of my seat the whole time. n____n

Now I'm off to read the companion piece~
person Espy
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, yaay! You finished it! ^o^!
Ooh, I'm so happy now.. first watching Advent Children, now finishing reading this... Aa, I can die happy now. ;___;
Sorry for taking this long to comment the finished piece.. XD
The whole fic was gorgeous. I'm still a fan of yours~ ^_^

Write something more! >D
person Jemisard
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really enjoyed this. It was so well done, I like the way you caught a very complicated relationship that in another way is so very simple. There were a couple of grammar issues (wrong words, and I know I'm a bugger for that too) but they were negligible compared to how good the story wa.

Characterisation was really good, plot was awesome and the action well done. I love the way you used the Sense materia, that was really cool.

Much enjoyed.
person Saesama
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just...wow. I'm loving this story more with every chapter you put up. Cid's memories, especially the Bronco's flight, were perfect.
person Cidsa
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really good :D
I can't wait for the next chapter, what will happen to Cid? @.@
person DarkFae
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi all, just replying to all your wonderful feedback!!
thank you so much for all your support and i promise the final chapter (or two) are in progress, i haven't forgotten about it! (the real world is so friggin busy, gah!!) half of its scribbled out, i'll work harder, promise ^_^

thank you all again!

nev