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for Beneath the Red

by DarkFae

person KSipesh
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this...please do continue it!
person DeathAngel
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! So intense!! This is without a doubt one of the best stories I've come across lately. I always love finding wonderful smut that has an interesting plot thrown in there. ^_~ Please write more as soon as you get the chance. I'd love to know how things end up!!
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was so sweet, heh. Don't worry, I never know what I'm doing with my pieces. Case in point, Brothel Boogaloo. ^_^U That's where the best stuff usually comes from though, just stick with it till the end. Something has to happen...
But honestly, I love your story...Very nice. ^_^
person Espy
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Again, a really nice chapter. Yay, smut! x3
It's getting more interesting every minute. I can't wait to see what that 'circumstance' is.. :3
Keep on the good work! ^_^
person Saesama
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>3 You don't often see a Vincent willing to beat the hell out of Cid for invading his personal space. Rather refreshing, ya know? Coupled with an nice smut.....
person Koo
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is very good. Why you don't have more reviews is a mystery. ^_^

Your Cid is just how I think Cid would be. I love your oh-so-mysterious Vincent! The sneaky, spying Cid getting into Vincent's secrets was the perfect way to get them together.

Can't wait for more.

Cheers! Koo
person Espy
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A nice chappie again.. don't leave us hanging? ;o;
Man, I'm so addicted to your text. XD
person FullMetalBlunt
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really really like this. When you sent it to me in .zip form my computer was crazy, so this was the first time I got to read it. Very nice. Good depth, I don't think it's too short. The materia idea was really good too. I can't wait to read the rest, keep up the good work. ^_^
person Wrath
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is really intresting and I can't wait to read more. You will write another chapter won't please pretty please
person Saesama
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Creepy. Bizarre. Fucking weird. But I like it. A lot. I hope there will be a conclusion in the near future.