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for Beneath the Red

by DarkFae

person Espy
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay-ness! Update! ^_^
It's nice to see that this chapter was just as good as the other ones. I love~ <3
Poor Cid, having to experiense the horror.. but at least he now understands on a whole different level. :3
What will come next? Boy, I can't wait. ^_^

..and I have no good ending ideas, sorry. You just have to try and get one yourself.. XD
person Espy
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Also.. poos Cid, having to experience all that.. but now he understands on a whole different level, right? ;3
What will happen next? Boy, I can't wait. ^_^

..but I have no good ending ideas, so you just have to get one by yourself. :P Good luck, and be quick.. XD
person DarkFae
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*more replies*
u liked it?? yay ^.^ chapter 4 is on the way, but i can honestly say it's going to take a more shonen-ai turn if i'm not careful... should this be shonen-ai? hmmm...*ponders* thank you all for your support!

nev
person Yami
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY you updated YAY YAY YAY I can't wait to see what happens next please update soon
person Barbara
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... Really, I love this story *____* and I want read more, more, MORE *ç*..... awn man, I love so much VinxCid paring

baby
person Barbara
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I adore your fic and I want read the continue. Poor vincent, a trouble does me. ... I see it ugly for cid, ever to do the browse in the other people's matters. I am curious of to know that treatment will reserve him vincent (vinny: you dared to search in my file??? "evil look" Cid: I.. I don't want "run away" vinny: you come here and left to rape.

excuse me for the ugly enghlis but I'm a italian girl and in english I ave 6 -___- I know alone to translate in Italian but I do toil to do the sentences in English

baby
person Tsuki
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really enjoyed that! I can't wait until you're next update to see what happens to poor Cid~
person DarkFae
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**replies** hehe, i'm glad you all liked it ^_^ i wanted to stray from pure smut (but there will be some later obviously...) of course i'll update! ^.^ its all in the sacred notebook, it's just a matter of editing it to my liking on the keyboard. still not sure how i'm gonna end it tho... any suggestions? lol

luv u all!

nev
person Yami
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow This is very good I feel sorry for Vincent what is going to happen? Please write some more Pretty please
person Espy
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Vince. ;_;
Neverthless I really liked the way you described everything. You will continue.. won't you? ^_^;
Seriously, I want to see the end of this.. o_o