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for Ballad of a Fallen Angel

by ModeOfAdam

schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
needs some mild beta-ing. otherwise very good. if you're interested, i'll apply to be your beta. just email me ras _ katt @ yahoo . com (just remove the spaces) :)
person yumimakai
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
congradulations: you officilally made me obsessed with your fanfic!
and for your first lemon, that was pretty damn good.keep it up and PLEASE email me (yumimakai@yahoo.com) when you get the next chapter!
huzah for perverted Cloud! XP
person Bluebash
schedule September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the story. I can't wait to read more.
Thanks, Kat
person sapphirexkat2
schedule June 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was your first lemon? very nicccccccccccccce

I love this fic. when will you update?
person Danie
schedule October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was really good. I don't think that you made anyone stupid in this. I am sooo gonna tell you to write more! soon xD One of my most fave couplings and you have done it all so well :D So sad... Poor Cloud *sniffle* So, this is amazing so far, please write more!

~Danie
person Kitsune Warrior
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW... That was hot.

This story is really, really awesome. I eagerly await your next update. ^_^
person Anon
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was ur first one? you rock!
person sevvi
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it a lot its great ^^ I think your first lemon was *drool like a perv* great. but then yeah I like the story as a whole too. I only spied a few grammar and spelling errors otherwise its fine ^^ so yea please write more ^^
person Juna
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good lemon, I think it is better then what i can write. I liked it. ^^ Keep it up.
person Ri
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooo I like this fic, cannot wait for the action! Yay lemon! XD Anyways nice fic you got going here, keep it up. ^^