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That was your first lemon? Wow. You have absolutely nothing to be ashamed of, it was hot... I could picture the scene in my head perfectly. It's true that some of your versions of them are rather out of character but I like them none the less, although Aeris's overflowing friendliness doesn't quite suit my tastes but that's just me and for the sake of the story she does a good job. So far I'm definitely loving this story and I'll be sure to be back for more.

Wow, I love this fic... It's great. Your writing style is absolutely wonderful. It has such a variety of scenes and moments, ranging from those beautiful scenes with Cloud and Sephiroth to downright funny. I was chuckling when I read that bit of comic relief taking place at the desk but my favorites are definitely those "romantic" moments. I simply adore the amount of emotion there are in them...
I hope you'll update soon like you promised, and some of that sweet loving would make us all infinitely happy. We all know whom Cloud belongs to...

Shall naughtiness ensue soon? I like the erotic edge the "invisible toucher" (Sephiroth) gives to the story.