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Er...okay.

Oh my god! What the fuck.......*sighs and then walks off shaking head*

When you put Mary Sue in the summary of course you are asking for a flaming.

I agree with Ed The Bus, especially in his second paragraph. I am completely horrified at this. @_@

Jesus christ! ....ahh...*cough*MST*cough*

Why do people think anyone wants to read their awful Mary Sue self inserts?? No one does. A note to the writer--please spell check, and learn to format the dialogue correctly. PLEASE.

Awesome chapter. Plz continue the story plz. Update as soon as u can plz. L8er Days =^_^=

Yes, this fanfic sucks. And it's Advent Children not "Avinet Children". wtfff. I suppose you only started to like Reno once you saw him in Advent Children. Hrm..

There's no way you won't get bad reviews with this Mary-Sue fic. Nobody wants to read about another author and how sexy and lovable she wants to be, and that's why Mary-Sues aren't popular at all. I do hope you get a good review from someone, but unfortunately, not from me. Sorry.

Is this scene supposed to be at your house? Why would you invite Cloud, your supposed boyfriend, and Reno, knowing Cloud would be angry? Why would Reno choose to stay, knowing all this?

It's not so much as it's a Mary Sue - which sucks in it's own right - but more the fact that the entire fic sucks. Keep your fantasies to yourself. kthxbye.

I personally can’t understand the reason people would even use a Mary Sue or an OC in a privately owned game or show. The creators (SQUARESOFT) of FFVII specifically made 9 main characters and a load of supporting characters to create the game, not additional characters to get ‘hold’ of a main character or supporting character.

The story itself seems to show more of a ‘selfish’ output to yourself and exploiting your dreams instead. Do the server a favor, ditch the Mary Sue and try to write a story using the copyrighted characters from the game.

Ed The Bus (Commonly Known as Oedipus)