rate_review Reviews

Really enjoyed the story. I hope you keep writing! =)

I love this story so much! It was the very first Ticent I ever read... and I printed it out so I could read it all the time << >> Absolutly amazing! There were a few mistakes, like mentioning Italian food, but other than that, it was still amazing! Keep up the awesome work!

A very most wonderful story! This has to have been one of the most intruiging Vincent/Tifa stories I have ever had the pleasure to read. I sudgest that you continue to write stories like this more often, for they are very good. The way you described the plot and what was happening in the story, was very good indeed, of course the description of the smut was very enjoyable, very very enjoyable if I do have the opinion to say, It was described sweet and to the point, showing Vincent's most sweet and tender emotions that he a man such as himself is capable of having inside of his heart, and yet some signs of dominance in the aspects of the love making. Not making the smut the center of the story as many authors on this site tend to do was something I am rare to see, that, or they attempt to create a plot, but fail terribly making the point of thier fanfiction, purely based uppon sexual intercourse. You actually took the time to create a point to this story other than to have tifa and vincent just have sex all of the time, very good!

I hope to see more of your stories in the future.

omg THIS is so sweet!

That was great. thank you for writing, and sharing it with us.

-kirsten

Cloud had tried to come up to me as well, but Cid had reached over and pushed him back. "I’m takin’ care of her right now, Spike."

The pilot crossed his arms over his chest. "I’m gonna pretend that you didn’t just try to make a joke."

I love your Cid lines. They're awesome! :)

this is really good. :!

Finally! Fiction that isn't utter crap! Tifa is actually in character! Woot!

I love this pairing, by the by. Kudos to you.

"Cloud, you’re with me. Barrett, you take Yuffie and shoot her if she starts shop lifting."

That made me laugh.

And I love the Vincent-the-Secret-Chocolate-Eater. ^_^

I very much enjoyed your story and it would be wonderful to see it all in Vincent's point of view.