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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Why!!! Why, God, WHY!!!!!!!!
A.k.a. If you would, please post the next chapter as soon as posible.
Thus making the rabid-crazy-fangirl-person-thing (That's me! ^^) very very very... (20 more verys later) happy.
Thank you!
-Sam (Because I hate my real name!)
Why!!! Why, God, WHY!!!!!!!!
A.k.a. If you would, please post the next chapter as soon as posible.
Thus making the rabid-crazy-fangirl-person-thing (That's me! ^^) very very very... (20 more verys later) happy.
Thank you!
-Sam (Because I hate my real name!)
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, where to start? :-)
Firstly, I'm normally a bit of a Yuffentine shipper, though god only knows why (something about it is just addictive, ya know?). Something about the idea of a VinTi fic never really attracted me, though thinking about it, they are a logical pairing because Tifa is the only one who might show real compassion, and the only one Vince generally tends to say nice things about in the actual game ("So glad you're alright, Tifa...").
I wasn't sure what to expect from this fic seeing as it's only the second VinTi I've read. And I was amazed! This is also only the second fic I've read where Vincent is a chocaholic and while some find that idea OOC, I think that sure - it wasn't featured in the game, but Vincent IS human, so why not show it? And one of the most common human weaknesses is addiction to chocolate (unless you're like that poor boy I knew in school who was allergic to chocolate).
Also, I was interested by the description 'stasis box'. This to me is very logical - because lots of people write these stories with Vin paired with whoever else and forget that there's a possibility that his demons make him immortal, thus any relationship with a mortal will only end in tears. That he was in stasis but will now age as normal is the best bet in my opinion, because it then means he can be happy with the character he loves - and let's face it, poor Vince does deserve happiness :-)
This story is very well paced, well IC, well written and well thought-out...I think you may have just begun to make me a VinTi shipper!
Well done, can't wait to see where this story goes
YL xXx
Firstly, I'm normally a bit of a Yuffentine shipper, though god only knows why (something about it is just addictive, ya know?). Something about the idea of a VinTi fic never really attracted me, though thinking about it, they are a logical pairing because Tifa is the only one who might show real compassion, and the only one Vince generally tends to say nice things about in the actual game ("So glad you're alright, Tifa...").
I wasn't sure what to expect from this fic seeing as it's only the second VinTi I've read. And I was amazed! This is also only the second fic I've read where Vincent is a chocaholic and while some find that idea OOC, I think that sure - it wasn't featured in the game, but Vincent IS human, so why not show it? And one of the most common human weaknesses is addiction to chocolate (unless you're like that poor boy I knew in school who was allergic to chocolate).
Also, I was interested by the description 'stasis box'. This to me is very logical - because lots of people write these stories with Vin paired with whoever else and forget that there's a possibility that his demons make him immortal, thus any relationship with a mortal will only end in tears. That he was in stasis but will now age as normal is the best bet in my opinion, because it then means he can be happy with the character he loves - and let's face it, poor Vince does deserve happiness :-)
This story is very well paced, well IC, well written and well thought-out...I think you may have just begun to make me a VinTi shipper!
Well done, can't wait to see where this story goes
YL xXx
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August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gods how I hate Hojo. What a damn bastard, felt good kicking his ass. I can't say in words just how much I am loving this story. I think you're getting me into a new pairing. I never really read much VincentxTifa before, (being a cloti fan) But I love this! Vincent (everyone) is very much IC. I'm glad he has someone like Tifa. After all that hell Hojo put him through he needs someone like her. I'm going on here... keep up this great fic Hon. *hands you candy* It's one damn great peice of work, you got me hooked on it.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! A decent Vin/Tif fic! Kudos Kudos KUDOS!!! You got Vin's character down! Keep on writing and I'm looking forward to the future chapters!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very in-depth story. I really like the way you've developed the characters. please keep updating.
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE!! I love this story! Im itching for more! Please continue!!! *dies*
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
~clings~ I swear on everything pure and holy that if i dont see an update soon, i will SCREAM!!!
its just so beautifull, i was like YES!!! on the first chapter, almost in tears on the second and sitting at the tip of my chair on the third wondering why in the blue Shinra hell chapter 4 isnt up already.. I want to know!!!!
please update soon ~begging and cling to your leg~ please!
its just so beautifull, i was like YES!!! on the first chapter, almost in tears on the second and sitting at the tip of my chair on the third wondering why in the blue Shinra hell chapter 4 isnt up already.. I want to know!!!!
please update soon ~begging and cling to your leg~ please!
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August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm totally in love with this fic. Keep it up
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woww..this is so good..^-^
please continue..xD
please continue..xD
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading this, since you stayed pretty close to the characters unlike some of the other ones out there. Please continue the story. I can't wait to find out how she continues to get him to open up.