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for Win Him Over

by Mykell

person spiritwolf
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story I wish that you finally update this story instead of writing another story I mean instead of writing a gay story from one of the best Final Fantasy games hell it seems like everybody writes gay stories now I wish they would story ruining the game or animes oh well update this story for crying out loud
person Dark Phoenix
schedule December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll be frank and say I want a Quall and NOTHING else! X( Damn Rinoa! Damn Irvine (okay Selvine isn't but but anything else IS)! QUALL RULEZ! *ties lit candles to head*
person cute_selphie
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's going okay...we need some more action okay?
person QueenAdreena
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Unlike some of the stories on here; this one is actually rather good. I found myself wanting to read more instead of pressing the back button. And, i would inform you of errors, but i didn't spot any(i wasn't exactly looking for them)
person Blue
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! finally a ff8 fic with the girls in it. This is such a rarity in this section. And better yet, this fic is about my fav girl, Quistis! Fantastic story so far, though it would be absolutely perfect if she does eventually win over Squall. I honestly haven't seen any problems with it whatsoever. So hope you continue this soon.
person blacky
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some more descriptions, not so much of that sort of bubbly talk with girls, cause they really dont think like that. If they did, i'd think our over population crisis would be even worse.. sall I can think of..
person blacky
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. A "Quall" story. FINALLY!
person blacky
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I can't believe what Irvine said didn't get him a slap in the face. *shakes head* Try talking like that to most girls out there you might as well walk around with an "L" tatooed on your face. Update!
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ah, yes this brings it back. I hope they all get lucky, maybe altogether!,,OOH, i'm nasty. Some parts could be scanned alittle more closely for errors, and some places were awk, but all in all, a very enjoyable read. You got the character dscriptions down pat. good going