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by corescouring

person Jaquard
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a well-written piece of work. Lots of different pairings and you describe each situation well. However, I feel that the orgy at the end happened a bit too fast for my liking. Maybe its just me...
person Asuka
schedule October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really rushed, plus it lacks in detail and emotions (even for a PWP). Sorry.
person QueenAdreena
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah, that was some massive sex fest. No plot, but not all that bad, afterall, I sat and read it didn't I?