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for Birds of Prey

by Lchan

person pinkfeathers
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whew! that was soooo close i thought it will be a sad ending!
i have a bunch of tissues gathering on my floor now >_< i really thought kadaj will die back there!
i love the 'real' ending MUCH than the other though.
but wow! you are the best author i have ever met!
i hope you'll continue to write other kadaj/cloud fanfictions! ^_^
person Rissie
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keeeeeeeeeee. Gorgeous, gorgeous, you made me CRY. *bursts into another round of tears*

That was such a beautiful fic, thank you for sharing it. I enjoyed the pairing greatly (they're so cute together!) and I'm glad to hear that you're planning to write more. You portray them to a tee. I'll definitely love your next fic, whenever it makes its appearance. ^^
person Shadow_Dweller
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that story made me cry...and i dont cry that often, brilliant work ^.^ ...tis ashame to see it finish though
person Booper
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I cried!! but then I was happy!! Yay happy endings!!
person Arien
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww..it ended! >< I really hope you write another AC fic soon with lots of yummy boy-sex. Kadaj makes a great uke ^_^
person Emeraldwolf
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww...smut. ^_~ I really like how you wrote this. Especially with Kadaj being his first time and asking all those adorable questions. I really hope you keep up the crazy fast updating. ^_~ I'm spoiled now. Rock on!!!
person pinkfeathers
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
at last! i can't believe it! this is best fanfiction i ever read >_<
your the best! [hugs] i can't wait what will happen next!!! update soon! good luck!
person S.s
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“ Man… you’ve got some hairy balls. “

x'DDDD

*wiping her watery eyes* Oh my, you're a genious. That statement just made my day. And I loved the whole chapter too, of course.

*the mental image of Cloud's balls floats around her head and she just can't stop laughing*

Umm yeah. Can't wait for more!
person Aya
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LMAO!!! 'you've got hairy balls' normally that wouldn't strike me so funny... but that was just fucking great
and that was the cutest and sweetest lemon I've seen!!
And you are now the greatest authoress
1) you keep good content, don't make the ideas hitty with just stupid crap
2) You update often (REALLY often)
3) YOU UPDATE!!!!!!!!
4) you hardly include Tifa!!! YAY!!!!
person Emeraldwolf
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That, my friend, was mean. ^_^ sucky cliffhanger. Yay for the update though. Hehe. I check this thing like three times a day. ^_~ How sad is that. Can't wait for the next part. I'm glad Cloud and Kadaj have finally 'hooked up' but I also hope that the tension remains. That's my favorite part of the story so far. Rock on!