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by Lchan

person nihilatrix
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Errm...I guess I came across as somewhat abrasive...Please allow me to clear the air. I like this story! I only intended to be informative...If it came across as a flame, I apologize. This is what happens when I write reviews after 48 hours without sleep. :P I have seen the movie, (yay bittorrent!) both with and without subs...(I'm still buying the DVD for the quality, and to support the artists who made it.) I won't spoil it for you, but I think you'll know what I meant when you see it.
person Lchan
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What are you people doing awake so late? - Rubs eye tiredly - o_o I just woke and there are like, many more hits then when I went to sleep at one. LOL. To the person I ranted out in a little intervention chap; sorry if I seemed mean. I have seen the movie, Japanese ver., and I understood about half because I had Japanese subs on to read it [ Because they spoke waaay too fast @_@. Sometimes japanese people have hard times with that ], but most of it was written in Kanji [ Most difficult Japanese written lingo ]. << But I understood the rest of the Hiragana and Katakana. Like the word ' haha ' is mother, and ' you have her ' or ' you have geo-stigma '. @_@ Man, that was like a huge test more than a movie. But I am continuing my plot the way I begun it instead of how the movie ends off [ NOOOO NOT KADAJ!! ;__; ], and like... >> yeah. Maybe I should toss Reno and Rude into, because they were funny in the movie [ Reno gets locked out xD ].

-Lchan
person S.s
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah you're so mean! Now I have to come back here every 5 minutes to check if you've added the next chapter xD

I love it how this fic goes on, and it actually has an interesting plot too. I think CloudxKadaj just may have become my favorite FF7 pairing of all time. Thanks to you!

Keep up the great job. :)
person Minako
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it.
Yeah to tell you the truth this is a lot bitter then the movie. I like CloudXKadaj, as a couple but you're right about one thing Kadaj has Sephiroth soul in him or something another. but I really don't think Kadaj would like it if Cloud did die I mean in you're fic. he maybe be a ass right now but I think in some way he did care fore Cloud. not unless you bring Aeris, Sephiroth or Zack back from the dead But I don't think that would happen beside the Major Jealousy on Tifa's part but the Idea of VincentXCid, is a good one. but Good Luck with this one.

tbc...?
person BooperD
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooes!! Cliff hanger!! Meanie head.... please write more?
person =)
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it. =)
person pinkfeathers
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! there are too few kadaj/cloud fanfics, so i'm glad your here! everyday i'm always droping by and checking when the next chapter is updated, and it is! so every day i just can't stop keeping my eyes on my laptop! i'm thankful that you update so fast, not like the others not completing their work, unlike you, you update everyday and i just can't stop loving this fic! i just can't stop reading it all over again!!! >_< so please please pretty pleeeeeaaaaase write more!!! and about the time your going to update please don't make it that slow, i just can't wait for what's coming up next! so good luck!!! i'll keep on looking! and keep up the good work! will be waiting!!! ^_^
person Emeraldwolf
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. You are doing a fantastic job. Especially because you don't have Cloud and Kadaj immediately be all lovey dovey. I get sick of that cliche in fanfics a lot. I love your Vincent. ^_~ so conniving. I am waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Bravissime author!
person Rissie
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keeeeeeeeeee! *hides beneath rock* I don't know if any of that was referring to me or not. I know I commented that The Scientist was Shera, but I didn't think I was being offensive...Ehhhh. Sorry if I was - I'm just a little on the thick side, and I believe I was a little sick when I was writing that review.

Despite the fact that it's quite different from the movie - which I have seen - it still fits. So...just, no complaints from this corner, you know? I think it's a great fic, and I'd really hate to see it suddenly get deleted because people got picky. So...just...um, sorry if it was anything I said?
person Booper
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahhh!! Don't delete it just becauseof meanie pantses!!! I am enjoying it quite a bit ^^. I discovered your story last night, read all that was there, and then skimmed AFF for anything involving little Kadaj to fill the void :( Do you think the other boys will ever be involved (sorry if you mentioned them as beign dead or something in the story...I just got out of orientation for work and my brain is dead as a doornail!)

Also to the people who are flaming...WTF?!?! This is supposed to be for fun and enjoyment of both the author and the readers. Who CARES if it isn't 300% accurate and every single character is "in character" It's fun and it's FICTION. Get off of your high horses,get over yourselves, go read something else or leave if you don't like it but don't ruin it for everyone else. The author is doing this for just as much of his/her enjoyment and owes no kind of service to you whatsoever. Go away kthxbye.