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Oh - my - I - love - this - fic. I found this today and just started to read it... and now I'm begging for more! Oh my, I just love FF7 and Advent Children and Cloud and Kadaj and... this story is just so gorgeous. Perfect. Simply amazing. Please write more soon!

ok... one minute cloud's an asshole then he's a hopeless romantic? He's got as many mood swings as Kadaj XDD
OH NOES!!! TEENAGE ANGST XDD
ok ok all joking aside, that was a really good chapter! Finally someone who doesn't have it an immediate 'i love you' 'i love you too' 'let's screw' 'ok' >< gets annoying after a while, you know?

I'm totally sorry if my last review angered you... I can be a horrible critic... It's just that I really enjoy your story.. so please, gomen ne?
I think I did read some of your other works too... something with Vincent and a wolf-woman...
I did like this chapter. Even with the sad parts... Rather kinky of Kadaj to turn Cloud into temporary shish-kebab... Heh, the wonders of revenge...:3
Again, continue...onigai? ^^V

I really like this story!

I would love the read of Shera bitch-slapping Cid around a bit though. ^__^

Woo, keep em coming! -Happy little clone now. Has had his fill for the night of stories, but would gladly like to see more, before he passes out cold.-

OMG OMG OMG OMG FINALLY!! another AC related story, this is just like *drools* so well done, good job!! *hugs* im so HAPPY! <3<3<3

<< Look. I forgot the name of the bike, so my mind generated something similair to it. Its not exactly something I know off the top of my head, and a search engine takes too long to load. :/ Chill out, its just a fanfiction. As for moving too fast; I tend to loose track of stories and interest in them quickly, but since I like this idea, I am -trying- to finish it before my mind moves on. So its either go with the pace, or I dont finish the story at all and it maxes out in the middle at chapter six. :/ Its probably going fast because I'm updating it twice a day.

-Lchan

:/ Okay, so I forgot the name of the bike. Big whoop. I saw the name -once-, and I just popped something out that looked similair. x3. As for moving too fast... I'm always thinking of new plotlines for different things, so I tend to loose interest in current projects quickly. Just check my other stories to see. Some havn't made it past chapter one. I'm trying to get this out before I loose track and not update it again. So, either keep up or not have it updated again because I became too busy. So thats probably why it seems fast.

I'll try and slowl it down though. >> For your sake. I just sorta wanted Cloud to seem desperate for some lovin' after practically having everyone he cared for die, and Kadaj is just sort of " o__o... yeah... whatever dude. ". I think its just Cloud and he want to be loved, because he's lonely. ;3

-Lchan

Okaay, when I read the words; "do you love me?" I completely freaked out and thinking; this story is going way to fast... and once again I've proven myself to be a dork and read on before I do or say something... Is Cloud seeing Sephiroth in Kadaj or something? You know, one time hero and Cloud's eternal wet dream... poor Kadaj... *snickers*
And isn't the bike called Fenrir? After the Northen myths of Ragnarok?
And you got me laughing out loud with the 'putting mother together and rule the world'... Cloud should be so friggin happy it's a teen in front of him and not Sephi...
And maybe I should be freaking out and saying that Cloud's 'I love you' 's are starting way to soon...

Next chappie...
*blinks and blinks again* Charming friends indeed... Cid really that snappy? and dangerous once given a beerbottle? :S
I love the smut in this one, but don't turn everything lovey-dovey in the next chapters. I guess you already wrote the chapters, but please, let Kadaj be ashamed or something the next morning. a side-effect of his pride. Besides, I want to see Cloud suffer some more in the way of utter sarcasm between Cloud and Kadaj.
You gave away a few spoilers here and there, but don't worry. A few grammar-mistakes, but hardly noticable... I've seen worser....
And please, continue... you got my perverted mind on the role, so please update soon. ^^V

I love your story! :)
Hope you'll update it soon!
Kadaj and cloud are such a cute pairing. ^.^