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Damn it! XD Just when it was getting good!! LMAO! XD Damn you Loz, what exactly did you do anyway!?! >< lol You absolutely must continue this sweety. XD I'm rather pleased to find a story with a plot and not rushing a relationship cause I always come across to many one shots, so it's nice to find something like this for a change. ^^;

Love,
Sin (A.K.A. The Flamer Killer ~Will give your flamers hell to pay! XD~ )

Even though Kadaj/Yazoo could 'somehow' be considered related by some, but I should admit that I really did enjoy your fanfic... the build-up is great! And yes, I definitely do agree that they are NOT true brothers, that's why this fic should NOT be considered as incest! For the first time, am reading a fanfic with Kadaj being Seme than Uke! LOL! I like how you have portraited him... Please update very soon! Great job!

Loving this already on chapter 1! So glad I can read more. :-) There is quite the dynamic between the brothers that you are exploring here and I am excited to see where it goes.

OMG! That chapter was so good. Damn, why did they have to be interupted?! I wonder what happened.
Please update soon!!!

Great story!!!! I love it, please update soon

I like it (I almost said lick there, ha ha) ... I like it so much I'm kinda shaky ... ^_^ ... I want it to go on 4ever AND I want a lot of smooching & licking & stroking & f***ing. What will the future bring? Only time will tell. ONWARD, MEN!

Ok. Well at least there was a wittle ****ing ... I personally think Yaz shoulda done the ho real quick behind the chocobo stable or something like that. This would've sent Kaddishi (my pet name for him) totally off and created lots of drama, not to mention a revenge f*** that would've sent Yaz off. All the drama woulda sent Rods (my name for the big guy) off. He would have finally screamed, "Why don't you two just f*** and get it over with?!?" Just my 2 cents, which is what I woulda charged Yaz for the BJ in back of the stable ... oh hell, I woulda done him 4 free. Who am I kidding? And I don't even usually do guys. (Usually.) But seriously, you got 1 bad review and a ton of good ones. P.S. Did you happen to notice how the flamer (they never leave their email addys, by the way) had a scatological thing going on? He said shit twice. Well, I'm a fangirl, too ~ at least we're not constipated. ^_^ Are you gonna write more? Or am I gonna have to borrow Reno's cattle prod & chase you around with it? ^_^

Yay! I was eager for your update. Very well done, the second Kadaj brought in that girl, I knew she was going to die at some point. It amused me how Kadaj used Yazoo's expensive gun lubricant. I wonder what Loz did, or what happened to cause them to rush out so fast. Don't leave me hanging too long. ^_^

>:D Muwahaha! Teh pwnage. Nice work indeed.

lol, aww poor Yazoo! i liked the bit about his gun oil!