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for Cold Wind

by BooperD

person noone
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Darn Loz! XD what did he do this time? And that girl was pretty stupid to get involved with the guy that was mean to her a few days earlier. Uke Yazoo ^_^ too bad their...moment...was ruined, I hope you update again soon!
person silver
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww, poor Yazoo, that must be so frustrating!
person silver
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
s'okay, i can wait, don't stress yourself:)
person Arrianne
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG..... I absolutely loved it!!!! Kadaj and Yazoo are so sexy together and i loved the way you haven't rushed into the whole romance thing. It's nicely paced and please, PLEASE, PUH-LEEEEAAASE update soon ^_^
person Seph Ish Nummy
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! New chappie plox! :P
person Shadow_Dweller
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really liking this fic *thumbs up* good job ^ ^
person young
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that I love this story. Yay for YazooxKadaj!! I hope the next chapter comes out soon. Good luck~!!
person shalanar
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaah!!! Kadaj! Why did you leave? 'drags him back' A very wet Yazoo wants to speak with you!!!

Anyway, very nice few chapters (I was so happy you updated! ^_^) and the two are still dancing nervously around each other. Now Yazoo gets a sudden realization and Kadaj is gone.....dammit! Please write more, i'm dying here to know what's goign to happen next! It was cute to see Kadaj so jealous, and amusing how he viewed his brother as 'asexual.' Yazoo's too good for anything else on the planet, 'cept maybe Kadaj. ;)
person noone
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooooooooooooo Revelations are always good ^_^ Well, I'm wondering where Kadaj went, please update soon so I don't have to wonder anymore (such things as wondering hurt my head) baibai!
person Anon
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with your author note. As someone who HAS a BROTHER, brother-fucking just squicks. It's refreshing to read someone's opionion that's the same as mine. Incest bites. >.<;