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for Cold Wind

by BooperD

person shalanar
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, one of my fave pairings! And I agree with your theory about the 'brothers.' It makes sense, and if anyone has a problem with it, well, no one is forcing them to read. Me on the otherhand, I loved this. Both Kadaj and Yazoo are dancing around the issue of being attracted to one another, but stubbornly denying it. Very good, please write more soon because the last chapter was much too short (basically, I want more). :)
person Erzulie
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This really is a beautiful story ^^
I cant wait to see how things progress : X

::excited::

You. ARE. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Shadow_Dweller
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woah that was awesome ^ ^ glad to see another Fan Fic with Yazoo in, he is so the best SHM there...closely followed by Kadaj of course

GOOD JOB! *thumbs up*
person noone
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh!!!!! KadajxYazoo!!!! I don't BELIEVE it! Cool! I was disappointed that the second chapter was actaully in response to a stupid flamer. I don't think that they are related in anyway that their related to each other except for the jenova cells in the. But were they actually created in a lab? I thought they were spirits and thats why Kadaj floated off in the end. I have no idea about really, but I don know that I really like this fic! Haha, I would imagine Loz has stinky breath and snores loud. >_< a confused kadaj is so cute and yazoo. yazoo is just cool. there's no doubt about it. So it makes sense for them to be put ogether, right? anyways I hope you continue this fic! baibai!
person BooperD
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm actually working on the second chapter right now ^^V It should be up by tonight! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!! I don't really know how they were created either. But for the context of this story we are going to pretend that I am at least mostly right XD
person Skwishee
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't care what idiot put that asshole review XD I like this story. And I don't see them as real brothers either. They're more like clones, like Cloud was. But no one complains on the SephxCloud stories, since HEY PEOPLE Cloud is Sephiroth's clone, the first one XD They're just as much "brothers" as the silver spirits. Just ignore those people, there will always be those lurking assholes who can't leave shit alone. If you don't like the idea of something don't read it. It's as simple as that.

As for this story, I would love to see more of it, I think it's well written. And of course I love the spirits. They were such interesting characters. Please continue.
person Mo
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ugh. God. I knew the shitty incest stories would pop up the minute they announced Advent Children. Fuck you Square for giving the brainless fangirls more fodder to chew up and shit out.