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oooo. intrigue. ^_^ nice little cliffhangery thing. i wanna see what happens next. rock on. ^_~

what, no!!! Don't leave it there!! What the heck?! I wanna read more, I wanna know what happens! Wah, can't wait for another chapter^^

yuppie! at last chapter 7! ^_^
as always, it was great! >_<
and who is that figure that dissapeared beneath the sheets...?
next chapter please! update soon!!!!!!!

oops again...what's happening to me, i forgot to write my name again, sorry!
yuppie! at last chapter 7! ^_^
as always, it was great! >_<
and who is that figure that dissapeared beneath the sheets...?
next chapter please! update soon!!!!!!!

;_________; *iwillNOTcryiwilllNOTcry*
gah! I must know! What's going to happen? *hope you don't have kadaj kill him because then I really will cry... but if it's done well, I'll live XD)

My Gods how I love this fic. I totally love CloudxKadaj YazooxReno (of course CloudxReno is my main.) Keep it up, you have a really good way of making your reader want more.

-Shakes water from his hair.- Well... I got my shower for the day.. Got stuck in the rain. Now, I get to sit here and wait for the update to complete my day and make me Happy happy. -Bounce.- Kada Kada got into FANTA!! -bounce bounce bounce.- Hurry hurry hurry.. I want to see more -whine.-

Kadaaju. xD...

ANYWAY. I like... have the next chapter half-completed with lotsa blood and Reno-panic attacks, but I keep getting distracted. ;_; My Miyavi Freedom Fighters jacket took over my life for a day or two, and the Rufus AC costume will consume more time. Uhh... but I plan on updating it today. o-o; My indian Japanese instructor isn't punishing us with another 90-some quiz on hiragana and katakana phrases [ ;____________; !!! -watched GPA sink- ] Sooooooo... I got some freetime between 3:30 and 6:00 when Math ends and Japanese begins.

I am having a -really- hard time keeping Yazoo in line. I didn't like him at all in the movie, because... I dunno. x___x I just didn't. I liked Loz better and Kadaj #1, so... He's prolly really out of character. Reno on the other hand, to me, is the most correct portrayal so far, because... I imagine him to be a slacker like " wtf i dont care " kind of guy, but quick to flip out. Espeically in the movie, he reacts to things really drastically. Uhh... Cloud doesn't know what he's doing and Kadaj is having violent moodswings. I really like... wanted him Manic Depressive with a severe split personality, cuz... Sephiroth still has control of him and takes over that part of his mind now and then. Mostly in carnage. xD

ANYWAY. I think the char's are off a little and the next chap. will have them a little more realistic and true to what SquareEnix made them like.

- Returns to staring at Math 101. Blank stare. Gloat. - --;;.... Stupid not-taking-the-last-two-years-of-math-in-highschool-because-of-laziness.

-Reichi.

-Whine. Grumbles something about 8 pain killers not even dulling his body pain. Blink, Shuts up.- <_<;; Anyways.. I love what you've again, done so far. I'm going to have to tell my Yazu RP brother about this.. Big fan fo RenoxYazu.. Still trying to get Kuraudou to read the two stories.. But he's being a lazy split hairs of a chocobo's ass. -snerks.- Moving on. I'll check back in a bit to see if you've updated yet again. Keep up the good work! -Thumbs up, throws confetti and the likes.- Okay.. maybe I took one too many pain killers.. ee;

It keeps cutting off my goddamn review!! -Growls low, eye twitching at AFF.net. Fingers twitch, they wrapping around the length of his favored blades hilt, Souba being removed from it's sheath in one smooth stroke. Feline like hues narrow on AFF server as the blade moved with accuracy, Dual Souba slicing swiftly in a horrizontal angle infront of him, effectivly severing the being/thing known as AFF server in two. Resheaths, dusts hand and goes back to being a moodly bugger. Pout.- The net doesn't like me any more. But either way.. I'll be back to see if you've updated, later.