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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After reading your other story, "Birds of prey", I was a bit anxious about reading this one, because there were several things in Birds of Prey which I didn't like very much, but I won't go into detail here. Fact is, I am a slave to the CloudxKadaj pairing, even more so because there are so few decent fics starring them.
And I was most pleasantly surprised by how you wrote Titanium Wolves. The pace of the story is going along nicely, neither too rushed nor boring, the other pairings you're introducing are very interesting (not much YazooxReno out there, either) and the characterisation - while not spot-on - is still very good.
I especially like the tone of friendship you've got going between Cloud and Tifa and Cloud and Vincent, because it shows that they care and worry about Cloud, but are willing to respect his decisions.
I'm not really happy with how you handled Kadaj's introduction to Marlene, because I don't think that after AC, Marlene would be comfortable with him so quickly, but that might be just my opinion.
However, I'm glad to see that you're taking the time to develop the relationship between Kadaj and Cloud, because a romantic relationship is a complicated thing, even if the people involved in it aren't slightly psychotic pretty-boys with a dysfunctional family and past. There's nothing that can ruin a good story for me like getting the characters from practically never-met to shagging each other's brains out, so I can only repeat that the rate at which Titanium Wolves is going makes me one happy woman.
And I hope you find a good way of resolving the conflict with Wutai. Looking forward to it, anyhow.
~ Papillon
And I was most pleasantly surprised by how you wrote Titanium Wolves. The pace of the story is going along nicely, neither too rushed nor boring, the other pairings you're introducing are very interesting (not much YazooxReno out there, either) and the characterisation - while not spot-on - is still very good.
I especially like the tone of friendship you've got going between Cloud and Tifa and Cloud and Vincent, because it shows that they care and worry about Cloud, but are willing to respect his decisions.
I'm not really happy with how you handled Kadaj's introduction to Marlene, because I don't think that after AC, Marlene would be comfortable with him so quickly, but that might be just my opinion.
However, I'm glad to see that you're taking the time to develop the relationship between Kadaj and Cloud, because a romantic relationship is a complicated thing, even if the people involved in it aren't slightly psychotic pretty-boys with a dysfunctional family and past. There's nothing that can ruin a good story for me like getting the characters from practically never-met to shagging each other's brains out, so I can only repeat that the rate at which Titanium Wolves is going makes me one happy woman.
And I hope you find a good way of resolving the conflict with Wutai. Looking forward to it, anyhow.
~ Papillon
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooohhh...hehe. I love Reno. Your version of him is so great. And Yazoo and him are an interesting pairing. ^_^ I'm excited for the battle scene too. Rock on!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cuuuuuuute!
i love this fic! and the part that 'so -that's- was the smell came from' haha nice one!
hope you'll write more kadaj/cloud yaoi part in the next chapter! ^_^
update soooooooooooooooooooooooon!
i love this fic! and the part that 'so -that's- was the smell came from' haha nice one!
hope you'll write more kadaj/cloud yaoi part in the next chapter! ^_^
update soooooooooooooooooooooooon!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oops sorry, i forgot to write my name at the other one >_<
cuuuuuuute!
i love this fic! and the part that 'so -that's- was the smell came from' haha nice one!
hope you'll write more kadaj/cloud yaoi part in the next chapter! ^_^
update soooooooooooooooooooooooon!
cuuuuuuute!
i love this fic! and the part that 'so -that's- was the smell came from' haha nice one!
hope you'll write more kadaj/cloud yaoi part in the next chapter! ^_^
update soooooooooooooooooooooooon!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eek! Kadaj! You can do it! Lol, I burst out laughing when he was like "Yeah, it's me......Sephiroth!" Lol! And the Reno Yazoo part was nice too. Thanks for updating so soon. ^_^
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well well well...Yazoo's back, that's interesting =P
Anyway, I love this story, and I share the same opinion as you : Cloud/Kadaj pairing is just soooooooo hot *drools all over her keyboard* (I'll have to clean that later ^^u)
So, go on with this story, I like the way you write stories very much ^^ (I also read Birds of Prey, and I loved it!)
Anyway, I love this story, and I share the same opinion as you : Cloud/Kadaj pairing is just soooooooo hot *drools all over her keyboard* (I'll have to clean that later ^^u)
So, go on with this story, I like the way you write stories very much ^^ (I also read Birds of Prey, and I loved it!)
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wait so why don't Cloud have a reason to fight he should get one not unless he wants evething to be taken away from him agin...the ones he cares about I wonder if Kadaj thinks that he's a teen in the eyes of Cloud becuse of Tifa she is older then he is...I wonder if he'll learn that Cloud one time did love Tifa long ago bue he don't no more...or even Aeris...a bit of green eye? or maybe not...so I'll also say good luck with this one so Please do tbc...
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't actually hate Advent Children. I just hate the fact that it hasn't spawned one decent fanfic yet.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEeeeeee! I was going to wait to read all you had posted before I reviewed, but I just read the first chapter and I couldn't help myself. This is AWESOME!!! *jumps around squealing* I love it I love it! I think you did a fabulous job incorporating it with the movie, and I'm so excited to read the rest. Nice title too. *runs off excitedly to read the other chapters*
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Yazoo x Reno! Yes!!!! I haven't seen this pairing at all until now. You made me very very happy. :) Anyway, I like the direction this story is taking, very much so. Kadaj's imbalance, and Yazoo's desperation to find his brother are very well done. And I love Reno's work-is-a-pain-in-the-ass attitude. Can't wait to read more! *big wide grin*