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for Fond Memories on a Cold Day

by wickedorin

schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dear gods, that actually made me tear up. Very good story and nicely written!
person slypantera
schedule July 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So sad. Poor Cloud. -___-

But this was still a very nice fic. Sad in a way because it's only a fantasy, but happy too because they smiled at him. *Cries* How do you do that? xD

You did an excellent job. ^_^ :D
person FFVII Addict
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
.... *sniff* ..... *sniff* WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! T.T Holy shit, man! Lay it on thick, will ya? I'm sobbing over here! Awesome lemon, but GOD! *sniffle*
person Zackneedsmoreluv
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully written ;o; . I've always wanted to read a good SephxZackxCloud and you pulled this one of great~!!
person Aislira
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffs* Wow, it's been a while since I've allowed a fic to touch me. You have a beautiful piece of bittersweet work here. I don't review lightly, and your story hit me hard enough to make me submit one. I truly like this story, it has a heart and a smooth style. Your version of Cloud after FF7 is an interesting one. I like what he does with the Buster Sword. Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us.
person ZombieDuke(Too tired to login)
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Goddamn Drake, I love you! Even though I have yet to see Advent Children, it is a strong belife of mine that Sephiroth, Cloud and Zack need some happiness at one point or another damn it! Getting back to the story, love the threesom, the fact that the bed broke and how you managed to get the LifeStream in it at the end, AND how you managed to write a story with a really creative plot without resorting to PWP! Right on man!
*cheers*
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was steamy and tantalizing and sad. The yaoi fanfic universe needs more mako boy threesomes, but this one was so blue, just being a fantasy that Cloud wants so badly but can never have. Regrets are a heavy burden.
person nihilatrix
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's a wonderfully happy ending...and very sweet! And the three way thing...OMGDS!!! That was fucking HOT!
person Anon
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely nummilicious XD. Man. And yeah, after Advent Children I am completely in "Everybody loves Cloud!" mode so to see him in a Seph/Cloud/Zack sandwich is just... yummy :).

I suck at reviewing so I'll just go with the usual U RUEL OMG YAY. Only with made-up grammar and slightly (slightly) better spelling. On my part. Your spelling and grammar is awesome :P. *hugs*