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by KSipesh

person LadyYeinKhan
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been reading this fic rather religiously (checking about everyday whether it's been updated or not^^' pathetic me). This is a really interesting fic. I like how you've written vincent. I've never really considered him being the whole "slave" thing. Reminds me of what i do to most of my OCs lol. But you've written it well and I like the whole cid dominating vincent thing (tifa....eh not so much)

But chapter 10!!! AHHHH stupid vincent! damn hojo for ******* with your mind! I wanna see dark and broody just a smidge happy again, like when he was with cid. AGH!!!

please update soon^^
person Dark
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWW!! That was soo sweet.. How will Cid react to this? dum dum dum... Stay tuned for the next exciting chapter of Need for Control!!! ........ ~sweatdrops~ No I am not on anything.. Just really hooked to the story...
person Moonglider
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that Vincent admitted he loved Cid!

I was a bit wary of the whole threesome thing, but you pulled it off quite well. You have no idea how I pathetically keep checking AFF all the time for new updates to this story.
person Bleuwyn
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're evil...seriously good stuff. Mmrh...write my smut, damnit!
person TeeDee
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG. The cat's out of the bag! Lets just see Cid's happy (I hope?) reaction! I adore how Tifa made her exit, by the way. It was fitting. The men were much happier together! Mm, yummy. What I especially love is the emotions going with the story, and the good feeling you give us of what the characters are feeling. I just hope Vincent can find a happy little place for himself. Chaos is much farther along the line of understanding than he is.
person Evil_DM
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting angle, and unique, as far as I've read. I can't fault your characterization, outside of your own unique twist. If the names were changed, I'd still be able to guess who was who with a fair amount of accuraccy. I like your variety with a pair, solo, threesomes (enjoyed that one especially). It's well written, and highly erotic--you're turning on a dyke here!
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!!! PLEASE MORE NOW!
person Death Penalty
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! GREAT!!! BRILLIANT!!!
love this chapter....and love YOU!!!
je je really good fic
HAPPY BIRTHDAY VINCENT!!!!!!!
person person
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*frowns* I'm not so happy about throwing Tifa into the mix. *throws darts at Tifa* I'll keep reading, but yeah... I don't think that the threesome is such a good idea.
person Karaoke Risa
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! I'm so sorry I didn't start reading this before. What a great story! I'm really loving this... and I love there are little hints of emotion involved for both of them... and I'm excited about the upcoming scene with Tifa. :) Great work, doll!