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for Need For Control

by KSipesh

schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop now! Vinny on his knees begging to be dominated is pushing all kinds of kink buttons. Cid's uncertainty about exactly what to do about it is a nice touch. I'm glad he's taking a positive interest in it though and that Vince isn't being overly frustrated by Cid's hesitant fumbling over exactly how to take a pretty boy in hand.
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter!! Must have more! :D
person ZombieDuke(not logged in)
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm, never seen this side of Vincent before. I like how you put everything into perspective and make use of Vincents past, along with the whole 'Hojo/Torture' time period. It's really intresting! I hope you continue on with it!
person Bleuwyn
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Thank you. Finally somebody gets it. Vincent x Yuffie, blech! Anyway, oh so intriguing chapter. Where are our sick minds going, huh? LOL.
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! MORE NOW!! WONDERFUL!
person TeeDee
schedule October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whee! I love it! So Cid now knows he has Vincent wrapped around his finger. It'll be hard for him, I'm sure, since he'll be skirting around things he isn't sure the other man wants, and Vincent sure won't be willing to tell what he does and doesn't want. Heh. I love your idea in this. The others will likely have to find out someday, at least the fact that they'll be together once that's official. Cid seems to know a bit of what he wants, anyway...

Can't wait for more!
person TeeDee
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good story. I look forward to seeing what happens next. Cid is uncomfortable with the attention he gets from Vincent, it seems, but things change. I wonder what will happen next at that bar, and how the probable change in their future comes about? XD
person Bleuwyn
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Hmm, never thought of that angle. Damn! Ah well...great start to a great fic from you. Oh I hate it when people just post one chapter though, it's like dangling a piece of candy.
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Must have more!