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for Would you?

by ZombieDuke

person Komikitty
schedule November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm glad you're not dead. For some reason I can't remember if I've already reviewed and I'm to lazy to go check. So; Excellent writing as always. =^_^=
person Setsuna
schedule July 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay for another Would You?(even though this has been up for ages and I'm just now finding it....stupid parents looking over my shoulder) Very nicely written. More pretty pretty please?? <3
person Cindyip
schedule January 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for more!(^_^)
person atOmicSquid
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh...ooohhh.....this paragraph...

"Maybe that is why I can never get over how affectionate you are, how your eyes darken with the first taste of lust, how they brighten and sparkle like pure Mako when you’re in my arms. I don’t deserve you. I know this now. I don’t deserve your kindness, your gentleness, your hesitant touch and innocent kisses. I don’t deserve any of it but I’ll be damned if I let you go."

Beautiful.
person atOmicSquid
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm...cheese. Crackers anyone?

I really do love this fic.
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was erotically sweet. Does that make sense? Sorry pot of coffee flowing through the veins, has me oddafied tonight. I loved that last line, you always get me with a brilliant line of dialog. Still loving this! Keep up the great work!
person Setsuna
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nooooo! My review was eaten-i-nated! Anyhoo! Weeee! All of your 'Would You?'s are WONDERFUL!!!! Are there going to be anymore soon?
person person
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squeeeeeeee!!! KAWAII!!! Kawaii kawaii kawaii kawaii! Sugoi. Yoku dekimashita. Cloud wa kawaii desu. Sephiroth wa Cloud ga dai suki desu. ~_^
person Anon
schedule November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg.... That is just so.... beautiful. And a bit poetic. Great job!
person Komikitty
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uwah! Sap! Squuueeeee! I heart vu!
Very well written, especially Sephiroth's possesiveness.
=^_^=