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for Would you?

by ZombieDuke

person Tainted Dreams
schedule October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mesmerizing! Aww -Help him Sephiroth! I love the way you are doing this. Do more, please!
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO!!! YOU'VE KILED THE BUNNIES!!!

*long pause* Er... nevermind.
person claire aka rubymoon17
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more!
person Setsuna
schedule October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for more Would You? !!! What happens next? Huh? Telllll me, pretty please?!
person Komikitty
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Cloud! Aw don't depress yourself, well...not needlessly anyway. =^_^=
Great work! *moves on to next chapter*
person Komikitty
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Protective Sephiroth! Squueeee!
=^_^=
Great work!
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I loved the whole ‘two faces’ part you did on this! That one sentence, explains so much!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O Damn.... I LIKE!!! Angst is good. Depression is good. Your way of writing/format thingie is AWESOME!!! ^0^ Whoot!
person squalmasy
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^o^ Oooohh, that was so cute. Again, I love this clever style you have of not actually saying much of what's going on. It's kind of abstract, and hard to understand until the ending, when everything seems to click. Maybe I'm just stupid, though. o_o;

Write more, if you can! O_O And you don't have to be depressed to write depressing fics! Is it strange that depressing fics make me happy? >> Maybe it is...
loved it!!!!
<3
squalmasy
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I may have enjoyed that a little too much. *grin* What can I say, vague angst is a great thing... especially if it's got to do with obsessive love.