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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
>_<;; NOO!! I have such a sensitive, sappy little soul...;_; *sniff* I could cry buckets over a simple deathFic - that's why, for the most part, I avoid these type of stories.
But I couldn't help myself, seeing that it was written by you! My hand automatically hovered over the link and went "clickity".
Now for this here story, you have a *very* perculiar style (it's different from the one in Christmas in July, anyway) - the way you leave things not fully exploited is...!! It hurts and it makes me cry knowing what happened/you intended to show inbetween the lines!!
Don't die nooo!!! ;_; *sobs, then runs off crying in a corner*
But I couldn't help myself, seeing that it was written by you! My hand automatically hovered over the link and went "clickity".
Now for this here story, you have a *very* perculiar style (it's different from the one in Christmas in July, anyway) - the way you leave things not fully exploited is...!! It hurts and it makes me cry knowing what happened/you intended to show inbetween the lines!!
Don't die nooo!!! ;_; *sobs, then runs off crying in a corner*
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(It's a...repost, because apparently the other one didn't go through...)
NOO!! I have such a sensitive, sappy little soul...;_; *sniff* I could cry buckets over a simple deathFic - that's why, for the most part, I avoid these type of stories.
But I couldn't help myself, seeing that it was written by you! My hand automatically hovered over the link and went "clickity".
Now for this here story, you have a *very* perculiar style (it's different from the one in Christmas in July, anyway) - the way you leave things not fully exploited is...!! It hurts and it makes me cry knowing what happened/you intended to show inbetween the lines!!
Don't die nooo!!! ;_; *sobs, then runs off crying in a corner*
NOO!! I have such a sensitive, sappy little soul...;_; *sniff* I could cry buckets over a simple deathFic - that's why, for the most part, I avoid these type of stories.
But I couldn't help myself, seeing that it was written by you! My hand automatically hovered over the link and went "clickity".
Now for this here story, you have a *very* perculiar style (it's different from the one in Christmas in July, anyway) - the way you leave things not fully exploited is...!! It hurts and it makes me cry knowing what happened/you intended to show inbetween the lines!!
Don't die nooo!!! ;_; *sobs, then runs off crying in a corner*
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks, gasps and falls off chair* Well that was unexpected. You actually made me gasp. Good job! It was good to see the dark side of your writing. Nicely done.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Bwa...wha-? no! Cloud! Sephi? oi..maaa...
*blinks*
Yes that was depressing, this better not be all there is! *threaten threaten*
pweeeaaassse? *puppy dog eyes*
=^_^=
*blinks*
Yes that was depressing, this better not be all there is! *threaten threaten*
pweeeaaassse? *puppy dog eyes*
=^_^=
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for suicide! Wait... No! Suicide is bad, so bad. Poor Cloudy! Sometimes, to chase your dreams or to be forced to go after what people want you to is so different... No one understands you, and you're lost.
Yay for suicidal people! They're the only brilliant ones, though it usually becomes a waste.
Hope you come out with more. This is a more poetic, yet storytelling, way to put everything. I quite love it. And the way you put it into segments isn't blasphemous as other people usually put it! Bravo 'n encore!
Yay for suicidal people! They're the only brilliant ones, though it usually becomes a waste.
Hope you come out with more. This is a more poetic, yet storytelling, way to put everything. I quite love it. And the way you put it into segments isn't blasphemous as other people usually put it! Bravo 'n encore!
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG T_T Again, short as it was....LOVE IT TO DEAAAAAAATH. Your style is so entrhalling...you don't describe what's happening explicitly, but I can totally feel it! THAT'S WICKED RAD! //loves you//
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know what you mean about the 'italics', anyway so glad you finally wrote more Seph/Cloud, though this is definitely darker than your other ones^_^;;
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! It's so artistic, and I really got into it. It was deep and simple at the same time...//loves//
XD btw..I am also one who gets stuck on uploading docs. It kills my formatting, too, because i don't know how to upload text files...D: We're in the same boat..
So, lovely job! It was delicious. >:D
XD btw..I am also one who gets stuck on uploading docs. It kills my formatting, too, because i don't know how to upload text files...D: We're in the same boat..
So, lovely job! It was delicious. >:D
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh so good to see you back and writing!! Wow this was deep! I really liked this. It gave me chills, hard to explain. Nicely done!!
Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
Tainted Dreams aka YoukaiObsessed
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... >:D Freaking awesome. Sugoi. Yoko dekimashita. *twisted smirk* In my opinion, that was so cute. Yeah, I think stuff like that is cute. I'm screwed in the head. That doesn't stop that fic from being ownage incarnate.