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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
interesting story concept. I look foreword to reading future parts in the future...assuming you actually continue this.
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November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok I liked your story for the most part but it needs work. First off, using the word "Arse" completely ruins the story. Either use "ass" or "butt" or anything else but "arse" because it sounds ridiculous. The only thing else is you need to space out your stories a bit, the solid paragraphs with tiny breaks kills the eyes.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just want to say this is the best ff9 story i have read so far you really know the caracters and what the people want to read i hope there will be more parts to this story
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October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is THE BEST FF IX fic on hear!!!!!!!!!
PLEASE continue.
PLEASE continue.
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September 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! That some good old fashioned smut you’ve goy going here. The idea of Dagger being the party's personal whore tickles me. Cant wait until you get around to Eiko. I see all kinds of possibilities with that horn of hers.
You what be really cool? She need to make time for some Eidolons too.
You what be really cool? She need to make time for some Eidolons too.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really should continue this. I want to see what the slut, Dagger, does with Eiko. And what Eiko does with Zidane. After all, those three never did anything, right? hehehe.
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, enjoy these stories, but I'd like to read about more Garnet giving felatio, and when Eiko is introduced i'd like to see a Garnet/Eiko thing going on. But aside from that keep doing what you're doing, I really like it hoping for a part 4.
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great, the bottle part was a bit much, but overall it was good, spellcheck is not enough you have to proofread when i write something i proofread it after im done then i wait a week and then proofread it and fix my errors then wait another week and repeat