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by KittyMeowMaxwell

person YACUMO
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE F%$#$%CK!!!
You can´t just leave the plot like that!!! And mostly when it is getting more and more interesting.

I am very mad at your Zell....f#$$%cking asshole, you can´t just want to be with two persons at the time. I really hate it because I have been there....and those kind of assholes don´t have the balls to tell you....you just find out for yourself.

It is really unfair for Seifer to be the "other one" or as we said in my country "tinieblo". All because he couln´t be more direct with Zell, and the later for being ridiculesly oblivious!!!!
I am sorry for Irvine too. It is not his fault that Zell decided to be a selfish bastard and completely decide what to do!!

Lol it would be very nice for Seifer and Irvine to start liking each other for having a nice threesome....lol and later our lovely Irvine getting all hot and bothered by Squall.

It would be very nice if Irvine or Seifer where the ones who pushed aside Zell....and for this idiot to soon realize who does he wants like for real real!!! And stop messing around with the most sacred and unique thing that a person can have.....their feelings.

hope to read you soon.
person vangel
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, the capter every week makes my weekend. I'm addicted to this fic like crack.

I love all your characters, and honestly, I'm a Zell and Seifer shipper and I love how both of them are in this fic, every chapter leaves me dancing eagerly or anxiously. XD

I love Irvine, too. I feel so bad for him, the poor little cowboy.
person Pyra
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
God I freakin love this story!*squeals*.....I CANT WAIT FOR SOME SQUALL AND IRVINE LOVIN!!!!!YAY!!!I LOVE PLOT TWISTS!!!!! ^.^
person Pyra
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD YES YES! THIS IS TURNING OUT TO BE SOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!
person Dracoqueen22
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooh, I just had to leave a comment. SO not expecting that but damn if I didn't like it. I've got to know what happens next. I'm literally teetering on the edge of my seat. Damn... I'm just speechless. I can't even come up with a coherent review. See what you've done to me?
person YACUMO
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far....but so damn slow LOL
I hope to see more angst for Seifer....ad idiotic bubbled-minded Zell realize it.....Gosh I hate when that happens!! When people is so closed to their feelings that they don´t notice that they are hurting other´s feelings.

Well hope to read you soon
person Luca
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
@____@ Eoko! Holy hell! You're a local author! Score! How cool is that? Duuuuude, I took your picture at the con, I think! By the ponds!
person Luca
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Upppppdate please? *winces* I can't believe I have to wait 6 days! Arrrgh!
person Pyra
schedule September 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THATS IT!!!!!NOOOOOOO!!!! HOW DARE YOU!!!!!*Points Finger and shakes it* You big meanies......Aw hell I LOVE YOU BOTH!!! GLOMPS 4 EVERYONE!!!!!!!!BRING OUT THE COOKIES AND BOOZE!!!
person wendy
schedule September 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
In your fic Squall is scary,so scary that I like him too much!!
Yay!
It would be quite a good idea to pair Seifer and Irvine for a mission! ^_^ but I'm waiting to read what is going to happen between Seifer and Zell.