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for Lightning.

by KittyMeowMaxwell

person Kitana Chou
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wouldn't it be sweey if for some reason of another Irvine ended up on the mission with Seif? lol thats what i think anyway. I've loved this story from the start, mostly cause I love anything with an uke Irvy. I especially love Zell/Irvy and Seif/Irvy. Please keep the frequent updates coming!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh bloody hell, I can't wait for the next chapter. I love the games Seifer is playing with Irvine. I really enjoy them. And please, Siefer and Irvine action! hrpm, sorry. I really like this story, it's so well written and your notes in the beginning, funny funny ^^
I eagerly wait for the next chapter.
person Pyra
schedule August 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH!*Stomps Feet* Seifer is SUCH an ASSHOLE! Grrrrr....*eye twitches continuously*...I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!
person Pyra
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"Would Zell bite him? With those little fangs of his?" This deserves four words.....Best. Fucking. Line. Ever.
person Wendy
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* More,please???
;)
person Wendy
schedule August 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh,PLEASE!!!!!

I WANT MORE!!!!!!!
I've been in love with Irvine since I started playing FFVIII at PSP,when I was a child!
I like Seifer too,I love when he plays the role of the bad guy.
Because of him,in this story things are getting more and more complicated.
The last chapter was fantastic,I'm looking forward to more and more beautiful scenes,just...PLEASE,let it be SOON!!!!!

*Please,note:
Wendy on her kness*

Oh,the couple Irvine/Zell is so nice,even if my favourite pairing,well...*hem* is.. Irvine and Seifer!!! *_*
I cannot stand Squall,but you make him look so funny and professional that I would like to read more about him.*giggles* maybe poor Squall may need to pair with someone too...he's lonely!And he must be GAY,c'mon!!!

Greetings from Italy,I'm sorry for my crazy random!
person ladyfiend
schedule June 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! update soon. me loves, me loves.

I'm a HUGE Seifer x Zell buff, so part of me wants that to some how happen, even though I know that's most unlikly. DAMNIT! lol. you've got yourself a very entertaining story...keep up the good work!
person DarkFae
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'm normally not an ff8 fangurl, but i cast my glances and boy i'm glad i glanced when i did! irvine was always sexy, but zell and seifer threw me for a loop! no real smut yet, but hey, i'm a sucker for plot and you have me hooked. i hope you have an update ready when the site comes back up!

-nev
person Boo
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
~ Oh yes. Yesyesyesyes, yes.

Wonderful chapters. So simple things happened, yet they still managed to surprise me.
Zelly ain't gonna reveal himself to Irvy soon, hmm?
But when he does, I believe that the consequenses would be interesting.

Ha. Seifer's an ass. And crying Irvine is so effin' adorable. <]

+l+a+m+e+n+e+s+s+,
Boo
person MNGoldenEagle
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. Wonderful. Adjectives do not describe it. WOO! Keep on writing, kitty and eoko!