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by KittyMeowMaxwell

person Jicky
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a pretty cute story~
kinda hard on Irvine, tryin to avoid his stalkers
something rubs me a bit the wrong way but i'd like to know how this goes on n turn out =P
good writing, keep it up!
person Blythe
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this so far and am looking forward to the next update! I love your chapter titles, they're fun. I'm glad to see an Irvine-centric story, they're aren't nearly enough!
person kari
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is a bit out of character, I don't think Irvine would say so many "like"s in a sentence... But overall, there's not that many stories about Irvine, so good work, update soon!
person Devious Lil Devil
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! a seifer,irvine & zelly story. sounds good so far. looking foward to your next update.
person cute_selphie
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome...i loved it..i really wanted to know who the guy on the bike was
sweet...keep going