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I'm just saying here....because this has been going on the last few chapters...

Cid dwells on depression because he can't have Tifa. Tifa comes and says, "I'm goin' back to Midgar whether you like it or not. Sorry." And then she gets him aroused. Cid has second thoughts for about half a second and then they have sex.

It's all pretty well written and everything...I'm just getting a little....burned out on the pattern. It's almost like...I'd either just like to them to get to Midgar and cut the crap.....or for Cid to just get ahold of himself and tell her no. It's only gonna make it harder that she's leaving. And it's gonna butcher his pride when it's all over. She doesn't want him. She doesn't love him. For her, it's just sex. But he really likes her and he keeps giving in to her. He may look on that as weakness on his part. (And Tifa's reactions to his rejection might be interesting to explore).

So yay....that's all.

This is a great story :), I love it. I find myself coming back everyday to see if its there. About time you updated. You need to type faster, suspense is not my thing ;) Keep Writing!

Chapter 17 is here and we learn a valuable lesson about smoking.

Well writen as allways.

That was pretty funny what Cid did blowing up on Vincent, though it was pretty apparent when they started dancing, something like that would of happened. I'm curious it seems that you are trying to e loyal to the movie, if you seen it? With Vincent going to the Ancient City, or is it just me tripping on weed? The point is on whether you are going to get Cid with Tifa or no. Well whatever, that was pointless, anyway I am enjoying this story, I hope your updating isn't as bad as you make it seem it is.

Wow. Cid's a direct kind of guy but that takes the whole three-tiered wedding cake. Vincent was very understanding. Although I don't suppose he'd really mind being groped by a tough rugged pilot. Whee! A little CidxVinny just because... XD

Holy crap, that was brilliant!! So funny... priceless, even. Great work, doll. Some of your absolute best character work in this piece, once again demonstrated in this hysterical chapter. You rule. You know this.

Oh, crap... interesting twist for Vincent. Poor guy... kinda. lol Great work, once again! I'm still as interested as ever to see what's coming!

still reading and still in love with this story!^^ I'll start commenting more after exams are over.;)

*motivates*
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Fast becoming one of my favorate stories on the sight, I find myself checking abck every few days spacificly to see if the next chapters up.
All the charicters are realy well writen.
Cant wait for part *err 15 I think*

I know it's not nice to laugh at the misery of others but that's just too funny. Dude, how wasted was O'Malley?