rate_review Reviews

Oh wow... what a wonderfully written scene. The dialogue... so tense and so emotional. You have a real knack for dialogue, have I told you that? It's brilliant. You continue to amaze me every chapter. Excellent.

Okay... let's try this again...

This was an awesome chapter. You are the master at creating that wonderfully thick tension. Poor Cid... *sniffle* Again, I love Vince here... you've done such a great job! This is truly one of your best pieces, the characters are just brilliant. Cheers, doll. Nice setup at the end, too. I can't wait to read more!

Wow! You really have a great way with words. I was absolutily jaw-dropped at the intesity of your story. Some of the intamate parts were so close , that even i had to cool off and take a breather. You really had me mesmerized! And the development of the characters that you have created and further developed has me really wondering about the story. I really hope that the story wraps up for everyone and Cid does understand that Tifa Couldn't be anyone without him, but at the same time, she can't be with him. That is completly brilliant! I love it, and keep writing!

Damn, for a moment I thought you had put up the next chapter.

Guess I'm gonna have to read it all over again while I wait. :D

"Free candy..." Hah! In-joke get! Nice job!

So. More soon, right? Right? Like...tomorrow? Or in the next five minutes? Maybe? Yeah?

Hehehehehe.... NICE. Awesome set-up. Empty ship.... hehehehehe.

Updates? Updates? UPDATES?

*cries*

Things just keep getting better and better. Keep writing! ^^

I love the dialogue in this chapter... not to mention the imagery *ahem*. Very nice. My reviews suck lately, I know. Meh.