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for Whispers in the Dark

by Scorch

schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry! Whats the matter with you!!! ; ; great story :P
person Savaial
schedule February 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome juxtaposition. Jealous Cloud, hot Vincent and needy Tifa make for a terribly compelling combination. You did this very well, bravo!
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bleu pointed me in the direction of this fic a while back, but I only just got an account here (and they only just let people review anonymously). This was very sensual, very gut-wrenching. And while I feel for Cloud (gods, that must be horror, traumatizing horror), I have to commend you on the VinTif description.

The imagery, the still silence in which Cloud glances over and nearly explodes with pain at the sight of "bodies moving sensually under blanket" in the dark, is probably one of my favorite lines ever.

Wonderful, dear Scorch.

~Rach~
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This was wonderfully written, very emotional and beautiful
person Scorch
schedule October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you all for your reviews! I wasn't sure what to expect with a fic like this, but you lot have made my day and inspired me to write another chapter of Whispers.

Hugs, S xxx
person SYNAPSE
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what can u say? served him right. :p

great fic!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great
person thimnl
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww poor cloud, but vincent good job! lol
person Cwolf
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy to see that you're writing again. You are by far one of the best writers of erotica. Amazing work, I hope you update your other stories.
person Angel Almasy
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Slightly angsty, and just all around hawt <3 I love Vincent/Tifa fics, they're my 2nd fave ship (1st being Vincent/Yuffie). Great Job!

One question though, are they at an Inn?