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for The Simple Pleasures

by ub3rschnitzel

person desden
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet and cute, and i love how you write reno. but after all the cuteness at the end all i could see was rude passed out at the kitchen table surrounded by 24 empty bottles. and then i was sad. XD
person FlurryxOfxFlames
schedule August 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I really love this <3 So touching ^_^
person lilith
schedule December 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww. that was so cute. yay for rufus that sexy bastard.
person Brittny
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm...nicely written... I like it!
person ShadowIcia
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this already. Totally adore RenoxRufus, so I hope more is to come soon :)
person Crimson
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I mean, perfect characterizations, flowing language, great plot and pacing, hot, sweaty, but not ruined sex scene (so many things can make a sex scene not work, but none of that was found here), and an ending so Reno-like. "...center of my friggin' universe." Oh Reno. He is my favorite ff7 character, and thank you for this lovely fic. I never would have entertained RenoxRufus really, but your fic caught my eye and it did not disappoint. Gorgeous.
person Kikvws
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! That was good...I usually wouldn't even go for the pairing, but you just may have made me a believer. Nice!
person Aihythil
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its lovely!! I love the Reno/Rufus relationships so keep it coming!! I hope you update soon becous its really good writing.
person squalmasy (not logged in)
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic, I have to say, is really quite good and deserves many reviews...I always wondered why the good stories never get them. (laughs)

I think you have a wonderful understanding of the human emotion, and you portrayed it in a very realistic manner. The story, while not terribly tragic, is still heartbreaking in the way that your Reno tells it. I also particularly like the relationship you have between Reno and Rude, and their indirect relation to Rufus; it's really quite believable and you've done an amazing job of describing their relationships using an artistically small amount of words. I don't know how you've done it, but you've done it well. And I'm certainly looking forward to the next chapter.

squalmasy