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Oh man, this honestly is my favorite story on AFF. The plot, style, everything is intriquing. It's so hard to find such things on AFF, and when I come across them, they aren't written well. ... This one, however, is. It's simply the best thing on here in my opinion.

I love the bittersweet relationship between Cloud and Tifa. This chapter was... amazing. You handled Cloud's POV very well.

... I'm curious as to how this is going to end. You've got me all confused about who I want with Tifa since I love both Cloud/Tifa and Vincent/Tifa. ...You're toying with my mind!

In short, I can't wait for more!

About the materia; I've never read that in any other fanfiction. I love it. I would've never thought of something like that! The way you say it, it makes sense. Why doesn't everyone have materia, when it seems so easy to handle in the game? Only the strong should be able to carry such a responsibility, eh?

And another chapter from Cloud's POV would be excellent. It's interesting reading the way he reacts to things, and its very amusing too. xD

Eeee chapter 18! -Flails all happy-like.- I hope you don't mind my sudden constant reviewing. x.o Now, I usually hate things concerning hinted Vincent/Tifa, but it was so FLUFFY and CUTE. O_O I even giggled a little, and awed and cooed and all that other mushy stoof. Arr. And Reno's so cool.

I've been reading this a while and I finally caught up with you. This is pretty good! Hope you don't leave us in suspense too long. What happens to Cloud? Is Jenova really dead? What will happen between Vincent and Tifa? Can't wait to find out!

lol! angel sanctuary... angels, demons, love, hate, betrayal, political trickery, sexual boundaries... heaven, hell, right, wrong... yeesh, i couldn't even begin to describe it! i highly recommend picking up the series (all 11 of them -_-;).

But ne way...

That was great! (30 years, huh? ;-) ) damn, i wanna see vince and tifa get it on, thats a hell of a way to get them together! (way to bring the focus back! ^_^)
PS, thanks for the advertisement! lol ^_~ see u next chappy!!

-nev

Ahh!! -Flails.- Gosh, I am so glad I read this. You are doing.. So. Well. All the characters personalities are fit to perfection. I love the way you portrayed Cloud, confused and crazy, as most people tend to overlook that. As many of your other reviewers have claimed, I must agree on the whole Vincent chocolate thing. XD So adorable. I think I squeak everytime I read him taking out a peice of chocolate. Or a cookie. Or something.

Reno/Yuffie... Oh dear. I never thought I would actually consider the couple, but after reading, I love it. Their relationship is so hilarious, and Reno's such a little perv. Muwaha.

And, in your last chapter, I adore the way you described the materia. It was really chilling, and even sent shudders up my spine thinking about it. And you left it at such a cliffhanger!! Eee. I'm adding this to my favorites. xD Keep it up, this is a story I know I could go back and read over and over and never get bored.

GAH! not fair! lol, another great chapter tho! it proves you can do action as well as angst. ^.^ its good that you listen so well to your fans (chocolate! yaay!). Hey, do you read Angel Sanctuary? i was noticing parallels, but mebbe its cuz i just read #11. (mostly the hip statement Reno made to Vincent... god, he cracks me up! "...And your hips!” He shook his head. “But I suppose it’s a blessing. It’ll be easier when you have children, you know.” ) now i must demand a prompt update! i'm getting all worked up now...

-nev

Hey no prob. Still can't get enough of Vince and the chocolate. I hope you don't mind that I put that in my fic too. I've seen a few people put the Vince/Chocolate thing in theirs. Yuff/Reno they are perfect for each other. This fic makes me laugh too.Gotta have laughter. (My fic is under Games/Rpgs, FF7. It's called JI Project. )

hey, now, don't take me too seriously, i love your fic! i feel its our responsability as reviewers to offer support and suggestions in a constructive nature ^_^ (did that sound lame to anyone else? lol did i spell stuff right? yeesh...) you portray vincent as an quiet intellectual with a dark past, not a sappy douchetart with super-baggage, and i respect that. can't wait for the next chapter, as usual ^_^

-nev

I really love your fic! I even showed my best friends and they love it too. XD Please, please continue.
You did an amazing job with their personalities and I absolutely -LOVE- Yuffie and Reno's relationship. I never thought that pairing could work out before I read your fic, but now I really support it and I love the way they treat each other. XP

And Vincent being a chocoholic is absolutely adorable. x3

Keep it up. I'd love to keep reading more! <3

Always been big fan of cloud/tifa. I'm a hopeless romantic for the Childhood love thing blossoming.
You do angsty romance very well. I find myself always reading ahead in the chapters to read about Tifa :p

This is easily one of the best fics I've read on this site. I just wanted to say kudos!