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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well since AFFnet had a hiccup and down went my review...
This is a great story, the plotline is developing well, with several possible subplots popping in and out to liven things up. Keep up the good work.
Good to see you have seen FF:AC, I was curious about the relation between Cloud's unique issues and the Geostigma and Emotional Withdrawl of the movie. Anyhoo, keep 'em comin'.
This is a great story, the plotline is developing well, with several possible subplots popping in and out to liven things up. Keep up the good work.
Good to see you have seen FF:AC, I was curious about the relation between Cloud's unique issues and the Geostigma and Emotional Withdrawl of the movie. Anyhoo, keep 'em comin'.
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November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
CID AND ZET! CID AND ZET! come on cid and zet! woo hoo! keep em comin!
-nev
-nev
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November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that's interesting! i like this chapter, it's short sweet and a little weird at the end. ^_^ it went from odd, to quirky, to hillarious, to depressing... i like it more everytime a new chap goes up!
-nev
-nev
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I HATE IT
MY DARK LORD SHALL COME FOR YOU
IT WAS ADAM AND STEVE NOT ADAM AND EVE!
MY DARK LORD SHALL COME FOR YOU
IT WAS ADAM AND STEVE NOT ADAM AND EVE!
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“Oh, you know that whale was just biding its time! He was waiting, sayin’, “I’m gonna EAT that fucking kid!”
That totally cracked me up.
And I liked the references to other FF characters, like Rajin and Eiko (who just-so-happens to like summons).
That totally cracked me up.
And I liked the references to other FF characters, like Rajin and Eiko (who just-so-happens to like summons).
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting...*ponders* veeery interesting. made me giggle some more... that and gag. Then again, i wrote some pretty gruesome vince fics myself, so i can't blame you, it gives the story a deep contrast of comedy and tragedy. why don't you have more reviews? this is coming along quite nicely...
one more thing... i really hate the idea of Vince in yellow... but somehow... it works...
-nev
one more thing... i really hate the idea of Vince in yellow... but somehow... it works...
-nev
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November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chocolate??? CHOCOLATE??? i never imagined vince with a chocolate addiction, but it's so friggin quirky i love it! it gives him a sort of depth. *giggles* hehe, chocolate. can't blame you, lol!
-nev
-nev
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like how you've worked in Jeremiah and Zet. They're not just characters to push along with the story. Especially Zet. Usually by now she's already making eyes with whomever she's been planned to get with. You've tkane time to attempt to build their characters.
I'll be interested in reading the next bits.
And whether Zet gets with Cid or Vincent.
I'll be interested in reading the next bits.
And whether Zet gets with Cid or Vincent.
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October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope you continue this. I'm really enjoying it.
And Reno/Yuffie! That makes me laugh.
And is Vincent being a chocoholic officially Fanon now? I've seen this detail with two other authors. Yay!
I love the way you've done Cid. He's so amusing. And Captain Jeremiah is a total space cadet. I like it.
Let's see.....I'm rooting for Cid/Tifa. But then, I'm a huge fan of them and I can never seem to find any stories about them.
And Reno/Yuffie! That makes me laugh.
And is Vincent being a chocoholic officially Fanon now? I've seen this detail with two other authors. Yay!
I love the way you've done Cid. He's so amusing. And Captain Jeremiah is a total space cadet. I like it.
Let's see.....I'm rooting for Cid/Tifa. But then, I'm a huge fan of them and I can never seem to find any stories about them.