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November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww! Cute!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first chapter was simply amazing. Astounding, really, how you managed to capture the very essence of Zell's virginity. And with text, of all things! The epilogue, however, had to be the climax. It'd be amusing to read about Zell and Irvine's sexcapades from Squall's point of view, *hint hint*
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it!! Wait please say there is more, cause if not i am going to cry! T_T Loved the second chapter with Squall covering his head with the pillow! XD So cute of him to do that. Heh great job really enjoyed it alot ^^
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As you have already got me chuckling at the second paragraph I decided to do a running review as I read. First of I've always wanted to make Zell crow something, but never found the place for it. Kudoes! And those are good from me since I am a Zell RPer of 2 years and am very fussy about how he is portrayed. So far I love it.
"Only on Thursday."! *cracks ups* That's genius! That's amazing genius right there!
Poor stupid Zell. *giggles* Poor, nieve, stupid, easily influenced Zell. Don't we just love him to bits.
And how did Zell get away with calling Irvine pretty AND a woman? Now that's a trick!
Tattoo touches! Man, we can't resist having the other trace the tatto can we? I mean, I really think it's impossible to NOT write that. ^^ But it's one of those things you can totally give into also.
XD, sensitive ears. Yea, that's one of my Zell's personal spots. XD
*snorts* I know Irvine's obsessed with his own looks, and chasing skirt, but how could he not know the unriveled master of Garden martial arts had a good six pack? *giggles* Maybe HE had a blond moment.
I love that small of back spot. <..< >..> I've used that personally as well and in RPs and it gives such a wonderfully lovely response.
FUCK YES! *lifts you up above my head and runs hops around cheering* You are a queen! A queen among queens! Welcome to the ZELL IS A FERKING STRONG MOTHER FUCKING SEME CLUB! You have been accepted as a member by Co-founder Eoko/Hicky! Co-founder Kittymeowmaxwell/Kitty will be ever so pleased!!!!!!!
XD! ANd welcome to MY club of "don't go clean up and ruin the mood when they can shower the next morning"! XD You truly pwn. AND THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
"Only on Thursday."! *cracks ups* That's genius! That's amazing genius right there!
Poor stupid Zell. *giggles* Poor, nieve, stupid, easily influenced Zell. Don't we just love him to bits.
And how did Zell get away with calling Irvine pretty AND a woman? Now that's a trick!
Tattoo touches! Man, we can't resist having the other trace the tatto can we? I mean, I really think it's impossible to NOT write that. ^^ But it's one of those things you can totally give into also.
XD, sensitive ears. Yea, that's one of my Zell's personal spots. XD
*snorts* I know Irvine's obsessed with his own looks, and chasing skirt, but how could he not know the unriveled master of Garden martial arts had a good six pack? *giggles* Maybe HE had a blond moment.
I love that small of back spot. <..< >..> I've used that personally as well and in RPs and it gives such a wonderfully lovely response.
FUCK YES! *lifts you up above my head and runs hops around cheering* You are a queen! A queen among queens! Welcome to the ZELL IS A FERKING STRONG MOTHER FUCKING SEME CLUB! You have been accepted as a member by Co-founder Eoko/Hicky! Co-founder Kittymeowmaxwell/Kitty will be ever so pleased!!!!!!!
XD! ANd welcome to MY club of "don't go clean up and ruin the mood when they can shower the next morning"! XD You truly pwn. AND THERE'S ANOTHER CHAPTER! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Forbidden stairway... *giggles* I <3 you.
Yes yes *nods* Zelly is a neat freak! Good good.
*giggles madly* Wee! XD Good epilogue!!!
And the hole gun going off... My Zell and Kitty's Irvine have this never ending argument involving a "cockroach". Irvine swears black and blue that he shot a cockroach that was in Zell room, b/c how could HE ever set a gun off accidentally? And Zell is LIVID that there would NEVER be a cockroach in his room. It's actually pretty run, although amazing we've manged the same argument over 3 times when they NEVER say anything new. ^^
If YOU like Zell/Irvine ficage check out Yams and Hicky on FF.net and Kittymeowmaxell on pretty much everything ^^. Lightning is our latest collaboration fic and I'm sure you'd really enjoy it!
Yes yes *nods* Zelly is a neat freak! Good good.
*giggles madly* Wee! XD Good epilogue!!!
And the hole gun going off... My Zell and Kitty's Irvine have this never ending argument involving a "cockroach". Irvine swears black and blue that he shot a cockroach that was in Zell room, b/c how could HE ever set a gun off accidentally? And Zell is LIVID that there would NEVER be a cockroach in his room. It's actually pretty run, although amazing we've manged the same argument over 3 times when they NEVER say anything new. ^^
If YOU like Zell/Irvine ficage check out Yams and Hicky on FF.net and Kittymeowmaxell on pretty much everything ^^. Lightning is our latest collaboration fic and I'm sure you'd really enjoy it!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, it cut off a whole bunch of my review! That's cause I did the arrow3 for heart. Baka think! I heart you! Is what I said, and that Zell was a neat freak! good good!
The I talked about my Zell and Kitty's Irvine and how they have a running argument about that exact scene. I said Irvine swears black and blue that he shot a cockroach because how could HE ever set off a gun accidentally, and Zell is LIVID that there could never BE a cockroach in his room. And then I said that it was amazing they have over 3 of those arguments since its always the same thing.
Then I was saying that if you liked Zell/Irvine. Specifically Zell seme/Irvine uke then you should check out my stuff on FF.net under Yams and Hicky, I'm Hicky, and Kittymeowmaxwell on FF.net, AFF.net, mediaminer or gwfanfiction. She's every where! ANd I also mentioned her and my collaboration fic called Lightning that I think you will REALLY LIKE!
There! That's my review... AGAIN!
The I talked about my Zell and Kitty's Irvine and how they have a running argument about that exact scene. I said Irvine swears black and blue that he shot a cockroach because how could HE ever set off a gun accidentally, and Zell is LIVID that there could never BE a cockroach in his room. And then I said that it was amazing they have over 3 of those arguments since its always the same thing.
Then I was saying that if you liked Zell/Irvine. Specifically Zell seme/Irvine uke then you should check out my stuff on FF.net under Yams and Hicky, I'm Hicky, and Kittymeowmaxwell on FF.net, AFF.net, mediaminer or gwfanfiction. She's every where! ANd I also mentioned her and my collaboration fic called Lightning that I think you will REALLY LIKE!
There! That's my review... AGAIN!