rate_review Reviews

You know Laffin. not all OC's are marysue's. Not once has she went on about the ocs looks and Reno seems to hate the OC at the moment, if it was a amrysue he prob would've fucked her slutty ass by now. I think the OC is good. She's bitchy so I like her. One thing hon, try not to make Reno listen to her much that's all. I notice when she called him a shit bag he didn't snap back. He should snap back. Other then that shes a good OC, and as for Laffin you can eat shit you fucking moron cunt.

Keep writing hon.

You're right. She's not your average crappy Mary-Sue. She's *your* personal constant craptacular skinnier, practically-perfect version of your fat, ugly, wannabe-goth depressed self Mary-Sue. Any chance you could possibly write a story WITHOUT you in it? Or how bout even trying to NOT name the character 'Julia' for a change, huh, lardass? Or do you still think you're actually legally, real-life married to Sephiroth. You are one dumb cunt!

Hehe I love it! Poor Reno......yeah I feel worse for Reno, Julia can handle herself :D please continue