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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've already said once before that I don't read yaoi. I think it's disgusting. Let me know when that sinks into your head, dear.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yunie, do you ever read any of those not "tastless porn" yaoi fics? Shit, they aren't anything original. I read 5 Sora/Riku fics in Kingdom Hearts and I knew exactly what would happen. I even knew during the first one.
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January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it's ok....
but chap 2 took WAY too long to get to the sex.....
but chap 2 took WAY too long to get to the sex.....
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice, a nice combonation of plot romance and sex, bout time we got a straight fic, no offense to those who arent. Im really impressed, ignore the flames, oh and the one guys right about "pussy" just doesnt fit the mood you had.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the comments everyone. I agree about the "pussy thing" going to do some editing.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
MORE @_@
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooo! Must.. read... more!
Ahem.
To be literate, I love this story so far and I would like - no, I MUST read more. So then. Please disregard flamers, they suck, and write another chapter.... please? *pout*
Ahem.
To be literate, I love this story so far and I would like - no, I MUST read more. So then. Please disregard flamers, they suck, and write another chapter.... please? *pout*
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well if you're intent on writing a 'quality' story like you boasted then I would take my advice without such a huge grain of salt.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good show. But dude...you really need to take the word "pussy" outta there. That's just as bad as seein' "weeping cock" in a story. Just totally ruins the mood. Also, don't listen to the naysayers. It's about time some good straight fics made their way on here. It already has more than 1000 hits. That tells you that both this was in demand and that the story itself is good.
Mo and Yunie, you two totally suck for killing the author's buzz :p
Mo and Yunie, you two totally suck for killing the author's buzz :p
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A story can have a plot then during the sex scenes degenerate into tasteless porn...such as this story showed so very well.