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for Intervention

by PhantomChajo

schedule October 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Every so often, I check up on this fic, it's damn well written, and has a pairing that, while I'm not really a fan of it (not yet) is veeeeerrrry interesting, actually its that you are making it interesting with how you've made it develop. The only problem is that your updates seem to take years... :( Can this be made any better? Pleeeease?

Pretty please?
Chiao
person vivarose
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Its really too damn bad ya never finished this piece, I did enjoy it so much ....
person Jdee
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow this is a really awesome fic... I really hope you update this when you can!
The titles for your chapters are awesome too I used to do tht aswell give my chapter titles names from songs to corospond with what was going on in the chapter.
Defnately will be waiting on to see what happens when Reno is conscious again!
I also love how it shows more of the character's personalities. it doesn't seem to OOC least for me... and yay chapters on Elena, she has been my fav female turk for a while now

Keep up the good work
person Overdose Delusion
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Babe, it's me ShadowIcia aka Jen. Great updates. I'm really wondering what twists and turns you're gonna take next.

Lov Jen.
person Rhianna Midori
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update! Update!

Still love it.

~Rhianna Midori
person Firework
schedule May 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This so needs to be updated. Rude's finally on the same page so really needs to get to Reno! Edge of the seat stuff this, I'm loving it I can't wait to see more of it!
poor little Reno though! Gotta love him really.
Can't wait to see more

Much love

person seph_ff07
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the most interesting peices I have read in a while. I don't see where Reno is out of character during his interaction with the children, on the contrary, that would be the safest interaction he has with people. I can see him holding on to that like a person on a cliff hanging on by their fingernails. I really enjoyed this one and hope to see the story continue.
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the review. It's surprising (and scary) that so many people have read this story. I was quite surprised. Got the next chapter plotted out, just have to work on it
person Esmee
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it, Keep updating!