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by SomethingDysfunctional01

schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, it's a nice prologue, and it sets the stage for the rest of your story for sure. I hope you find some way to bring Aeris back to Cloud so that this can be a Cloud/Aeris fic, my favourite FF7/Advent Children pairing. I hope you continue to post and we get to see more of your story soon.
person Debzi
schedule May 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Been ages since I came across a Clorith pairing! Although I read at the top that there are other Cloud pairings in this but still Clorith is too hard to find. Anyways I like it so far, the emotions and reactions etc are really good. Update soon
person naomi
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Raven. That was very sweet and tender. I love fics like this^_^ You really captured the tenderness between Cloud and Marlene, with her picture and everything. It was nice to read a fic with Cloud's kind side in it. I usually don't read het, but CloudAeris is one pairing I'm drawn to. I kind of feel sorry for Tifa, but I always thought that Aeris was the one he really loved^_^ It'll be interesting to see how Aeris meets Cloud from the lifestream since she's not "really" in the world, at least physically. Please update soon.
person naomi
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Raven. That was very sweet and tender. I love fics like this^_^ You really captured the tenderness between Cloud and Marlene, with her picture and everything. It was nice to read a fic with Cloud's kind side in it. I usually don't read het, but CloudAeris is one pairing I'm drawn to. I kind of feel sorry for Tifa, but I always thought that Aeris was the one he really loved^_^ It'll be interesting to see how Aeris meets Cloud from the lifestream since she's not "really" in the world, at least physically. Please update soon.