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Ooooh I love this idea and how ya write them, specially Zell!! Update soon kk?

My dear, dear friend, is almost a year since th elast time you update, please don't keep us in the dark *sniff* I miss your storry!!!!!!! *cry*

may I have some more please? (pout, wink) Very good plot, nice tension with the whole Irvine thing - is he evil or just concerned? (shiver)

Hey, I think making Raijin and Fuujin siblings is an interesting change. *nod nod* Also loved the Seifer/Zell-ness. Irvine's something too, ain't he!!? What is he~??? Hmm, what could Irvine be... something absolutely sexy, and... Irvinesque... it's a word... Oh, I dunno. But he's something! He rubs Seif the wrong way and that's all I need. *grins* Maybe he's an elf, or an angel, or a lesser-devil.... XD

Yeah, I read that story too. And I'm not being rude (at least I hope not), but for a moment I thought it was the same one. You know, with keywords like "Zell" and "incubus" I just mixed it up.
Mmm, I like the fact that you made Seifer angry at Zell there in the first chapter, about him stealing souls. Although I found his punishment slightly harsh. Ok, thought if over for another ten seconds. Maybe not. Zell did some serious violation... Ah, hell, I don't know, I just thought it fitted. Anyone else noticing how I'm beginning to ramble?
And btw, I hope Zell is one hungry Incubus... ^_~ Because I want more chapters like this to come my way!


Hugs, Z

ooh..i like this story
please update soon *begs*
i love this seifer and zell story...its really cool because i haven't seen a storyline like this..please update soon!!!

I enjoyed reading this. I assumed it would be a oneshot, but from reading the summary more closely, its seems you're making it longer? I would like to read more.

Oh man, I wish I could clone rewiewers like you ^_^ Thank you so much for the input!

I proably add a little more romantic/elegant quality to the love scenes when Seifer and Zell get on better terms, and when more characters come into the story. Writing noncon or borderline noncon is still hard for me. I do love words, you really should write down your guide and post it up, I'd love to read it.

And I love a strong zell sub... It's always fun to see how he gets what he wants despite the fact Seifer thinks he's incharge. : D

I'm not sure about the author, as they seem to have left AFF.net, for the other two of the three Zell incubus stories, but the Zell/Irvine one was called Hunger. I'm kinda sad that I can't find them now. I had Hunger bookmarked but it looks like it's been removed. -sigh- Well, I like the idea of Seifer being a hunter, and that he caught Zell. Despite the fact that I do make Zell the stronger of the two in my fics, he is also submissive to Seifer, so I like this.

Some of the sexual writing was a bit "there, done, happy?". But I'm used to prolonged foreplay/teasing and more higher-level words. I really need to make a list of the words and their "levels" so I don't confuse myself. Anyway, according to Eoko's Levels of Sexual Language- cool title- "humping" would not be a higher-level word. Then again, they weren't in happy romance mode, or maddened lust driven mode, so such language is not necissarily required.

I look foreward to reading more about the Hunter and the Incubus in the future. I appologize if my review has caused offence, but I feel a small critique is better than "OMGS! YAY! I love it! WRITE MORE!!!1111" -_- as truly exciting as those reviews are they share nothing of how deeply the reader actually looked at your story, or what level of insite they may have. I hope that what I wrote proved useful, helpful, inspiring, or simply gave you something to read for a few minutes. ^_~

And for fun: Oh dear HYNE! I luv Seifer & Zell SOOOO much! I can't w8 to read more! plz plz plz plz! PLZ UPDATE LIKE.... NOW! RIGHT NOW!
Okay... may have been making fun of reviewers a tiiiiiiny bite right there. Heh.