rate_review Reviews

Excellent start.

Please update. I really want to know what happens.

UPDATE
pretty please

I would like to see more Terra/Shadow goodness. The more I think about it, the more I like the pairing. Keep it up!

Review Remix, Great story over all would be excellent with a Beta, or at least correct Grammar it would be nice if you correct some of it for up coming readers. Set backs. Secondly this feels too much like a chat room RP, if so even more so to get a beta and correct. If not, then well thought story. However, Terra felt a little out of character, I think she could have been done better. More subtle way to seduce Shadow. Shadow was more in character. Just slightly out of that perhaps he would have rebelled or took longer of getting on with the idea. The sex scene was, good over all by mere characterization. Though some of the ministrations were hard to imagine and off set the flow. Though, you can believe the details of how a First Time would be like and an oddly experienced man. Good Twist…. Actually Kefka/ and Shadow with Terra Fanfictions are increasingly becoming my favorite. Good Sadist Kefka… who knew… I would appreciate the update also. Though, I’m not a Beta I’m willing to fix up your story a little, if you like.

Ohh I am loving this story so far. This the first story I have read that has a Shadow and Terra pairing. Shadow was my favorite chracter. I am very interested in where you are going with Terra and Kefka. Please update.

Aww, I really like this story. I just now made an account so I could comment on it, but I keep checking back from time to time for updates. I just did on an impulse today.
Do you have the rest to put up and are just debating it, or still have to work on it?

I think things are just getting interesting, and every chapter really, really makes me want to read the next. =3
Would love to see you post more, if you decide to!

This is great! I always thought Terra and Shadow were a completely underrated couple. Please continue!

I like the pairing, and how you have set it up, but I think the story would be easier to read if you would run the story through Spellcheck/grammar check and double-spaced. I would like to read more, however.

awww come on lol please update soon